Undergraduate / UTAustin: Undergraduate Transfer SOP Essay-Technical Theatre major [18]

some of the word can be spiced up a bit. but after all it is well written

Undergraduate / "To Have Pride" UT Transfer Admissions Essay. Topic A [3]

I'll(I will) admit I found my inner self a little slower than others. But I eventually got to where I wanted to be, nonetheless. By finding myself, I discovered that I am an imaginative, determined, and justly prideful individual.

i think every thing is ok

Undergraduate / "The results for HIV are positive" - Issue of importance essay [5]

this essay is very well written
i had been through that experince with my love one.
i really like it
good luck with the college application