It's too common I feel, to mention Asian stereotypes in a Common Application essay. I also feel that it's not a good idea for an Asian applicant to mention medical school aspirations.
I would recommend not focusing on your ethnic heritage as this essay topic is quite common and really says nothing about your individuality and strengths as a person. Try another topic, please!
Best of luck to you in your college search from Asian Advantage College Consulting.
While well-written, this essay topic is too common among Asian applicants, and thus is not likely to differentiate yourself from the many applicants with your background. My suggestion is to pick a topic that is unique to you, and demonstrates what you would bring to a college campus in terms of your abilities and strengths.
Best of luck to you in your college search from Asian Advantage College Consulting.
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