Undergraduate / "MY OWN PATH, Chinese mothers" - CommonApp Essay [6]

It's too common I feel, to mention Asian stereotypes in a Common Application essay. I also feel that it's not a good idea for an Asian applicant to mention medical school aspirations.

Undergraduate / Essay for USC What Matters Me and Why - Overcame difficult and build confidence [3]

You're already over the 700 word limit!

Undergraduate / "Growing up with Chinese parents, now college" -My Common App Essay [10]

I would recommend not focusing on your ethnic heritage as this essay topic is quite common and really says nothing about your individuality and strengths as a person. Try another topic, please!

Best of luck to you in your college search from Asian Advantage College Consulting.

Undergraduate / "In Being a Banana: A Cultural Mishap" - General questions on format & prompt ComApp [9]

While well-written, this essay topic is too common among Asian applicants, and thus is not likely to differentiate yourself from the many applicants with your background. My suggestion is to pick a topic that is unique to you, and demonstrates what you would bring to a college campus in terms of your abilities and strengths.

Best of luck to you in your college search from Asian Advantage College Consulting.