Writing Feedback / The Holy Mosque in Mecca, Saudi Arabia - essay describing a place you like to visit. [5]

Other than the corrections other people have previously pointed out, I don't see any. I loved the way your essay was written! You did well with the was you described things. So nice descriptions, it sounds beautiful :) good work!

Writing Feedback / Toefl essay : The most important leader in your country. [5]

I agree with the corrections Mea505 made, and I didnt catch anyothers in addition to those. But well done! A boy in my class was talking about thailand and some of the customs there, very interesting stuff! You write well, good job!! :)