carotorres
Oct 22, 2010
Undergraduate / 'In and of the City' and 'In and of the World.' + 'Bring a person' - NYU [5]
thank you so much!
I've made some changes in order to keep the word counting low, but im still struggling with that, especially in the last one.
Prompt 1
I was born in Colombia, a nation struck with corrupt politicians and human rights violations. I want to study Political Science in NYUAD, since in a future I want to be part of a change that will help my country become a better place. As my school's SGA president, I understand the importance of leadership, exceptional education and engagement, traits most of our politicians do not count with, however NYUAD embodies them all in order to provide an education that will help me become a positive agent of change.
Prompt 2
NYU is a challenge not many venture themselves in. It embodies the school's embrace for complex and often criticized cultures. Having grown in a conservative country like Colombia, studying at NYUAD represents a life changing experience I'm ready to embark on. It would enable me to challenge my beliefs, experience different ways of learning, and develop a broader conception of the world, thus making of me a more holistic being, able to provide a positive influence in my hermetic surroundings.
Prompt 3
Ten years ago my family had to abandon our farm due to death threats made to my father. Twelve years ago, Johan's father, a soldier whom he has never met, was captured and is now the longest-held hostage of the guerrilla. Things have started to change: my family is back in our farm and Johan travels around Colombia raising awareness of the forgotten hostages. Now, I would take him to my farm where I will show him my gratitude towards his family sacrifice and that is making our country a better place and assure him that as I got my farm back, we will soon meet his father.
thank you so much!
I've made some changes in order to keep the word counting low, but im still struggling with that, especially in the last one.
Prompt 1
I was born in Colombia, a nation struck with corrupt politicians and human rights violations. I want to study Political Science in NYUAD, since in a future I want to be part of a change that will help my country become a better place. As my school's SGA president, I understand the importance of leadership, exceptional education and engagement, traits most of our politicians do not count with, however NYUAD embodies them all in order to provide an education that will help me become a positive agent of change.
Prompt 2
NYU is a challenge not many venture themselves in. It embodies the school's embrace for complex and often criticized cultures. Having grown in a conservative country like Colombia, studying at NYUAD represents a life changing experience I'm ready to embark on. It would enable me to challenge my beliefs, experience different ways of learning, and develop a broader conception of the world, thus making of me a more holistic being, able to provide a positive influence in my hermetic surroundings.
Prompt 3
Ten years ago my family had to abandon our farm due to death threats made to my father. Twelve years ago, Johan's father, a soldier whom he has never met, was captured and is now the longest-held hostage of the guerrilla. Things have started to change: my family is back in our farm and Johan travels around Colombia raising awareness of the forgotten hostages. Now, I would take him to my farm where I will show him my gratitude towards his family sacrifice and that is making our country a better place and assure him that as I got my farm back, we will soon meet his father.