Undergraduate / "designing and arts"-How your education at AI will help you attain your career goals? [2]

Please, help me because I'm not really good at my essay and such.

Fashion designing is a piece of art, can be expressed by attitude and manners on the way of dressing. I am passionate about arts, especially when my mind is having imaginations of vision images that needs to come out, makes me excited to think that this idea inspired me for what I am passionate; this reflects for who I am and what I want. Attaining a career that I want is a goal I commit. Working with a professional designer and being an apprentice is a dream of mine, I want to learn more ideas about them that can inspire me. I found that Art Institute of California- San Diego has the program that I want, and offers just the right education and programs that can help me to obtain my career goals. Allowing me to experience the job that I want and where I can express my passion and interests for designing and arts. I am confident that Art Institute of California-San Diego will give me a better education.

Thank you.