Undergraduate / Essay on "Overcoming an obstacle" and "Qualities that make me an Asset to UCF" [8]

I love this essay. However I think that at some points, your vocabulary gets a little to over-flowery, as if you tried to shove as many big words in there as possible.

Undergraduate / "What is one thing you do really well?" (communication): The Ohio State University [3]

I love the topic you chose, it seems different from what others might write about. I'm not a great writer myself, so I don't feel like I should give you any suggestions other than the fact that "self-taught myself" is pretty repetitive. You should replace it with "taught myself".