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Yuking   
Dec 9, 2010
Writing Feedback / Young people should try different jobs before sticking to one in long-term. [6]

In the recent years, the opportunity for people to get a job is abundant than before. Therefore, some people especially young people usually try some different kinds of job before they decide which one is suitable for them. For me, as a young people, I am totally agree that young people should try several different kinds of job before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term. Because through this way, people who has no working experience are more likely to find a good job in the future and people who desire to find a better job can also get satisfy.

It is extremely fit for the young people who has just graduated for their school because of they need to get a job to filled up their inadequate work experience. Nowdays, if a people want to get a fire job in a big company they will noticed that these big company are require people who have 2 or 3 years work experience. Eventhough this prescribe restrict many young students, however they can find a job in small company or in other field as well. A friend of mine who had graduated from collage last year has had changed two jobs from now. He told me that it is diffcult for a stuednt to find a job when just graduated. When he just graduated, he serve as a wating table in a restaurant not because he like this but because he had no choise at that time, but now he work in a small company that he likes. Therefor, he told me each young people had to go through the same way to try different kinds of job before they find the most suitable one.

It is also beneficial to people who like adventure and try new things.It is knowed as a good access to broader one's perspective of the word. Some successed people or elite are people who like to try different kinds of job in their career to enrich their life. Arnold Schwarzenegger who was a famous actor and then become a governor of California is a good example to illustrate this phenomena. According to the same theory, young people should have the sence of adventure and try to explor their future. Therefore, by changing different kinds of job, young people are able to learning more about our society and get more experience about both career and life.

To sum up, I think young people should try several different kinds of job before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term. Not only because young people can find a proper job through this way but also because young people can get a more sufficient view of the society.
Yuking   
Oct 9, 2010
Writing Feedback / Do you agree or disagree:The advertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits [5]

Nowadays,With the rapid development of TV and the mass media.More and more firms take advertising as a main source to introduce their products and attract the potential customers to buy their products.Especially for some food firms,their advertising are usually very incentive for people.However,I can hardly agree that the advertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits because even thougt there are different kinds of advertising,they are usually about different category of food.And different kinds of food advertising is towards diverse audience in different kind of age stage.

Admittedly,Some food advertising such as fried chicken is usually cause unhealthy eating habits.People will be stimulated by watch this kind of advertising.In this kind of advertising,it usually describe their products are very attractive even though the food is not health at all.So,there often have some people get confuse by watch this kind of advertising.Conversely,I insist that unhealthy eating habit have no connect with these advertising at all.Eating habit is foster since when were little kids,Mostly it is foster by our parents not the food advertising.In addition, other advertising like beverage advertising have no influence with our eating habits,and a recent health report argue that drink beverage have no negative influence with our health.

We usually lose our sights of that people in different age stages have different extent to accept the advertising.People like little kids and teenagers are tend to have a strong acception to the advertising.I can still recall that once I saw a advertising about a kind of fried noodle when I was ten years old.In the advertising,it said that they have different kinds of cards which have diverse cartoon character on it.Thus I began to collect this kind of card by buy a lot of this fried noodle,Sooner I realize that I have so many this kind food so that I can not eat them all.Thus during a long time I was just eating fried noodles instead of eating regular meals.However,when I was grown up I became realize the imporeant of regular diets,Since now I will never influence by the advertising and forbid they to control my mind.

In summary,I still doubt that the advertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits.Became we can not omit the different category of advertising and the differents of the audience.In my point of view,I believe that a healthy eating habit is mostly depend on ourself.
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