Scholarship / "Seek knowledge even as far as China" - Global Exchange Scholarship (chemical eng) [4]

"Those words has (have) inspired me since I was in secondary school."

"My objective is to graduate with good fantastic result(s)"

"Living and studying in (a) different country with (a) different culture when I am still an undergraduate student will be a good preparation for my graduate stud(ies)."

"Pursuing (my) Master('s) Degree"

"industries has (have) not been"

"from different culture(s)"

"I have been work(ing) hard"

"learn(ing) English by myself without attend(ing)"

"problem was also almost prevent(ed) me"

"(The) type of program I want to pursue in (the) USA is a Bachelor('s) Degree in Chemical Engineering(,) a program that allows me to"

Very well written essay, just some grammar errors. Great Job!