faby
Oct 19, 2010
Undergraduate / "The Problem of Prejudice" - Common App Essay [7]
awesome, awesome paper! i love th raw confessions. it's well written, educated. one suggestion: start off with "i am a white, upper..." it has a powerful impact and makes the reader (me) want to continue. good job :)
awesome, awesome paper! i love th raw confessions. it's well written, educated. one suggestion: start off with "i am a white, upper..." it has a powerful impact and makes the reader (me) want to continue. good job :)