whomp123
Nov 6, 2013
Undergraduate / DONATING BLOOD; "How can you contribue and benefit from a diverse campus" - Rutgers [2]
"raised in an environment"...where donating "is" seen...
I think the last paragraph is good tying together your thoughts about what you can contribute to the rutgers community but perhaps in the other two paragraphs, you can try to expand a little and talk about how important community service is to you..etc
(take a look at my rutgers essay if you get a chance please!)
"raised in an environment"...where donating "is" seen...
I think the last paragraph is good tying together your thoughts about what you can contribute to the rutgers community but perhaps in the other two paragraphs, you can try to expand a little and talk about how important community service is to you..etc
(take a look at my rutgers essay if you get a chance please!)
