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acanell   
Oct 25, 2010
Book Reports / CREATIVE IMAGINATION; ALICE'S ADVENTURES IN WONDERLAND [2]

Rather than saying "Creative imaginations imprint on society is enormous. It is what propels us forward."

You can put them together and make them flow a little more by saying something like:

"Creative imaginations on society has an enormous influence. It helps stimulate one's thought, going outside of the box and thinking more creativity.
acanell   
Oct 25, 2010
Undergraduate / "Life goes on - make most of it" - my first statement of purpose. [2]

At the end when you say "I was ecstatic when I found out that if I had done my observations a century back I would have probably beaten Mr. Erik Erikson in bringing out a roughly similar version of the psychosocial stage theory of personality."

..."I believe that if had done my observations a century back I would have discovered Erik Erikson's version of physiological stage theory of personality before he had"
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