Posts by jsummitt

jsummitt

Oct 26, 2010

Undergraduate / Significant Risk ('easier decision') & Book that changed you "One Heartbeat Away" [4]

On the first one elaborate on what you learned from choosing the easier road and possible less on the program.. i would still think you are lazy so make it were you are not and where you learned something from choosing the earier root.

I dont have any coments on number 2 overall good essay

edit my essay the title is Penn Supplement essay Which extracurricular or academicr paths do you want to pursue

jsummitt

Oct 26, 2010

Undergraduate / "A focus of a journalist": achievement, risk, or experience essay [8]

This essay is good great topic
If it fits i would include a part of the article maybe at the top kinda give them a little taste of it. It always works for me.

You turned the essay back on yourself and showed maturity and responsibility
But right now, I was, for the first time, facing the reality of my assignment- you do not have to have a comma since for is a preposition

edit my essay title:
Penn Supplement essay Which extracurricular or academicr paths do you want to pursue

jsummitt

Oct 26, 2010

Undergraduate / Norman Rockwell, the lucky winner.. (bringing any special person) [2]

How long does this essay need to be?
And i would try to make it come back to you and say something about you personally.
I liked this one better.

Norman Rockwell, a local muse for me, is whom I would like to tour NYC with. I would love to hear stories ~~from Norman~~ (remove) about the everyday life scenarios he created for The Saturday Evening Post and his Boys' Life Publications. Later that evening, we could go down to Serendipity for a banana float and I could hear stories of how he gorged himself on bananas,remove and doughnuts one night to make the weight cutoff the next morning during enlistment in the U.S. Navy; discussing his sources of inspiration. you have to have a complete sentence after a semicolon

jsummitt

Oct 26, 2010

Undergraduate / "The American farmer" Which extracurricular or academicr paths do you want to pursue [3]

Prompt:
Considering both the specific undergraduate school or program to which you are applying and the broader University of Pennsylvania community, what academic, research, and/or extracurricular paths do you see yourself exploring at Penn? (limit one page)

"The American farmer is the only man in our economy who buys everything he buys at retail, sells everything he sells at wholesale, and pays the freight both ways."

- President John F. Kennedy.

At the Wharton School of Business at the University of Pennsylvania, I see myself exploring a path in environmental policy and management. Over the summer, I attended the Tennessee Governor's School for the Agricultural Sciences where I was engaged in a Natural Resource Management survey class. My professor (a former forest ranger) taught the class his love for the environment, and how to protect the environment while gaining benefits. This class inspired me to pursue an environmentally related occupation, while still maintaining my zealous business career plan.

Environmental policy should be implemented within every business setting and can be managed in a feasible manner. Environmental policy should also promote practices that improve the environment yet still allow utilization of the vital resource. Today, with help from the media and the government, environmentally friendly practices are economically beneficial. With an environmental policy and management concentration, I want to build the framework that will allow these practices to still be economically feasible in the distant future.

"Farmers are the definition of sustainability. In an economy doomed to destroy them, farmers nurture the environment, their most valuable resource." - - ME"