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A00226270   
Dec 14, 2010
Undergraduate / "the power of public policy" - Global warming essay for U of O's Honors [3]

Public policy that is created by science can lead to mankind towards solving an even to our most pressing problems.However, when public policy manufactures science, the truth is ripped...

Needs a lot of correction! But I have no time.. good night!

I may be wrong. he he.. I hope an expert can help you.
A00226270   
Nov 22, 2010
Writing Feedback / Raw food vs Cooked food - How's my intro? [13]

I just found out that I have to write an introduction how my topic relates to science.
I wrote all that for something and you guys helped me for nothing. he he.

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A00226270   
Nov 21, 2010
Writing Feedback / Raw food vs Cooked food - How's my intro? [13]

Hi Shalma,

Which two sentence?

This, "There have been many researches by scientific about eating raw foods that they prevent diseases, how good they are for you, and they contain the actual nutrients that our body needs. After I reveal the fact, raw food will the winner." ?

Oh, and she said it should be related to either science, non-science, or pseudoscience.
I am done with my essay, but if I post it here, she could find it.
A00226270   
Nov 21, 2010
Writing Feedback / Raw food vs Cooked food - How's my intro? [13]

I am done writing my essay. Do you mind if I send you a message, so you can help me out.
To make sure my grammar is good, etc. I am sorry for the inconvenient. I think my essay is pretty good, I did a lot of research and learned a lot. Never mind.. does not work! Do you have an e-mail?
A00226270   
Nov 21, 2010
Writing Feedback / Raw food vs Cooked food - How's my intro? [13]

Alright, thanks! I am going to start writing and then post it here. It will be a 5 paragraph essay with facts. Also, I have a presentation about this topic. I am going to do a comparison for my presentation, but first I am going to make sure the students know what is raw food, the benefits of it, and what happens when it's cooked. After that, I am going to start comparing raw food vs cooked food nutrients using graph, pictures, etc. I hope this sounds good. This is important for me.

^_^;;
A00226270   
Nov 20, 2010
Writing Feedback / Raw food vs Cooked food - How's my intro? [13]

I found it at this site : living-foods/faq.html below Why are enzymes important?
Is that a bad quote or I did something wrong there?

Thanks for the help! I appreciate it.
A00226270   
Nov 19, 2010
Writing Feedback / Raw food vs Cooked food - How's my intro? [13]

Thanks. I will do that. However, I wrote that. =\
Perhaps I will write more.
This essay is for biology. So she wants us to pretend that we are scientific.

Oh, you said "a" quote? I assume I need just one quote? I don't know what to add.
Is adding what you said fine? :P
A00226270   
Nov 19, 2010
Writing Feedback / Raw food vs Cooked food - How's my intro? [13]

How's my introduction? I want to make it perfect and then start writing. Feel free to correct my grammar, etc. You may edit to make it better.

Raw food vs Cooked food

Many people do not know about raw foods and the benefits of these raw foods. They just eat cooked and processed food when they are hungry that lacks of nutrients. In addition, there are a lot of foods in American that are either cooked or processed. People do not realize how harmful these foods are and how in danger they may be for eating cooked foods. People think that cooked foods are real food, but in reality, they are not real food at all. The truth is that cooked food has most of the nutrients destroyed due to the heat. Also, Cooking destroys the live enzymes that aid in digestion and health. ." If you eat food that is enzyme-less, your body will not get maximum utilization of the food. This causes toxicity in the body. (Can you guess why over 75% of Americans are overweight?)" -The Living and Raw Foods F.A.Q. There have been many researches by scientific about eating raw foods that they prevent diseases, how good they are for you, and they contain the actual nutrients that our body needs. After I reveal the fact, raw food will the winner.