Undergraduate / "Basketball and other aspects of sport" - Common App Extracurricular Short Answer [6]

Please help me!!! Many thanks! :)

This is my first draft for the 150 words short answer. Any idea is welcomed.

Three seconds left in the game, the team is down by two. XXX has the ball, he runs to the arc, and elevates... He hit the three! He did it!!! This never happened. I worked so hard that I was elected as a captain of the school basketball team, but my left knee sold me out. A bad injury kept me away from the court months. The experience was painful. However, I did not give up. My love for basketball urged me to explore other aspects of the sport. When I finally returned to court again, I was more than a captain. I am now a coach for a primary school team, and also a certified referee. Basketball did not make me become professional player, but it made me a stronger person. Never let obstacles stop you, keep your faith, listen to your heart, and success will follow.