Writing Feedback / The movie "Troy", Achilles - someone you admire. How have they affected your life? [6]

Hi, Hachilles!
I like your chose and arguments. You associate your personality with this hero. Great!!!
There are two things I think may be changed. In the first part of your journal/essay each sentence starts with "HE" and in the second part with "I". In this case repetition doesn't sound good. Try to rewrite your sentences. And the second thing to change is that your second part doen't fully explain why you want to be like him. Suggest two or three more arguments.

Good luck :))

Student Talk / International students - where are you applying? [11]

Thanks a lot.

Student Talk / International students - where are you applying? [11]

What is international development exactly?

Hello, everyone!!!

I have a LITTLE problem. I'm a graduate student in European Studies. Recently I found an interesting master of international development studies. The description on the university website, where i want to apply, is not precise. So i ask those of u who know something more about it, please, explain me what it is. And can I connect it with my bachelor (in which way)?

Thanks in advance for ur help.

Svetik :))