Graduate / Social activity club, Best Design, Mechanical Engineer - ISB application [5]

Hi There,

This is Rajni. I have gone thr ur write up and it looks ok. Frankly if you are aiming big, you will need to work more on your essay.

Remember that the essay should reflect something unique about you in a polite and sophisticated way and not in a bright , "too" show off way. This puts off the application down. Believe me, the essay is an imporant snap of ur personality.

Please avoid "frequent" "I" s from ur write up. avoid "I have also" agian and agian. The part about working in "underserved" area should be out. hey, you are applying ISB and not social service school... LOL... As a alumni of IIT and IIM , I can tell you this.

This link will help you more:
accepted/mba/appwriting.aspx

You have a good CV from what you have described.

Please drop me an email at

rajraghunathan3@gmail.com so that I can send you some helpful material.

Best,

Rajni Raghunath BE, MBA

Dep. CEO (Operations)
Honda - North Division