yan0419
Nov 22, 2010
Undergraduate / "If you had a second chance... hip-hop TV" (Purdue Statement,International student) [2]
essay qusetiom: If you had a second chance - the opportunity to do something over and do it differently - what would you choose to do over and what changes would you make?
"When one door closes, another opens; but we often look so long and so regretfully upon the closed door that we do not see the one which has opened for us. "- Alexander Graham Bell
If I have the chance to do it again, I'm sure I will insist on taking the hip-pop class to learn what I like.
It was the first time for me to know hip-pop when I was 14. The dancing steps in TV shook me with its infinite power. I knew I love it when I heard my heart beating that excited. This amazing thing sudden turned me to a danceaholic. I began to save all possible money for the tuition as soon as I found a hip-pop club. Every evening when I passed the club building, I can't help looking inside the window and imagine I am dancing with them. The passionate music made me stop and shake with my bicycle.
My essay is not finished yet. I m not very clear about what to write the next and it's really helpful if someone could let me know the improvement of my first part. thanx a lot.
essay qusetiom: If you had a second chance - the opportunity to do something over and do it differently - what would you choose to do over and what changes would you make?
"When one door closes, another opens; but we often look so long and so regretfully upon the closed door that we do not see the one which has opened for us. "- Alexander Graham Bell
If I have the chance to do it again, I'm sure I will insist on taking the hip-pop class to learn what I like.
It was the first time for me to know hip-pop when I was 14. The dancing steps in TV shook me with its infinite power. I knew I love it when I heard my heart beating that excited. This amazing thing sudden turned me to a danceaholic. I began to save all possible money for the tuition as soon as I found a hip-pop club. Every evening when I passed the club building, I can't help looking inside the window and imagine I am dancing with them. The passionate music made me stop and shake with my bicycle.
My essay is not finished yet. I m not very clear about what to write the next and it's really helpful if someone could let me know the improvement of my first part. thanx a lot.
