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An important skill for a person in the world today (using a computer)? [4]
the subject is What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Nowadays we are living in a technological world,(no comma here) which is opened to be developed. In my opinion(comma) the most important gadget/SKILL in recent days is computer LITERACY.Thus(COMMA) the most significant skill for a person is using professionally and deeply computer. Computer usage/LITERACY is like an obligation for several people.
First of all, several people work with computers, not only computer engineers but also bankers and secretaries. You can make too/SO much things in the computer easier than classic methods. For example, a banker pratically manage his/her customer' accounts on the computer screen. A secretary could write down weekly reports and send via e-mail to her/his boss.
Secondly, people can provide their needs from computer because of/THANKS TO the internet, which brings the whole world to your door. For instance, people could easily do/GO online shopping while they are sitting among/IN FRONT OF the computer. Thus, a computer makes spare time to/TO DO other things suc/SUCH as/: enjoying, making/PLAYING sports, getting interested in what they want, in order to waste their value time to shopping from grocers, butchers/THIS SEN MAKES NO SENSE.
Finally, as a social meaning computer gives to/ the person an amazing area/computer benefits people so much. We can send visual present to our friends to celebrate their birthdays. Moreover, we can chat with people all over the world. And/as a vivid illustration, one of my friend married with a girl, who met from a social network.. Another social network, called as Facebook/called facebook, is being used by millions of people all around the world. These examples reflects/reflect the importance of computer usage.
In the sum up/to sum up,i strongly belive/believe that learning how to/learning to use use computer is the most essential proficiency in our current life.