Posts by firstchoiceu
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firstchoiceu Nov 26, 2010
Grammar, Usage /
Awkward phrase starting with 'therefore' - need help revising [6]
Awkward sentence using "Juncture"-Help revise?Sentence is:
I am at the last juncture in my life when I can successfully adopt a new name.I am speaking figuratively, but I don't know how to use "juncture" without using "when" which makes it sound a clunky. Help?
firstchoiceu Nov 26, 2010
firstchoiceu Nov 25, 2010
Grammar, Usage /
"The name of the product ..." - Revising a sentence in essay? [4]
Working on my essay right now, a sentence in my essay reads, "
The name of the product is double the beginning part of the word "dictionary."I already mentioned in the essay that the product is called
dictiondiction but I want to emphasize that the word is made from the beginning part of "dictionary." How do I rephrase the sentence to make it less awkward?
firstchoiceu Nov 25, 2010
Undergraduate /
Tennis Rhythm, extracurricular activity [3]
... in a uniform motion
; a rare moment to escape the hectic place we call life
; a moment on the tennis court.
The opponent is unable to reach the ball
, and I triumph.
very vivid essay. just a few punctuation errors.
firstchoiceu Nov 25, 2010
firstchoiceu Nov 25, 2010
Grammar, Usage /
Awkward phrase starting with 'therefore' - need help revising [6]
"Therefore, it wasn't necessary for me to find my keys."This phrase sounds a little awkward. I wanted to use "necessary" in some way (maybe, I didn't necessarily need to find my keys) but every phrase I tried didn't sound right. Could someone help me revise it?
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