surfersteph19
Nov 29, 2010
Essays / the YMCA Achievers program, Illinois Essay #2 - activity/experience [3]
I would make the first sentence of your essay more exciting. The admissions people reading your essay will be reading thousands of essays each day, and you really wanna make yours stand out! But other than that its good.
I would make the first sentence of your essay more exciting. The admissions people reading your essay will be reading thousands of essays each day, and you really wanna make yours stand out! But other than that its good.