Undergraduate / "in the middle of a contractor's life and Islam" - essay about myself [4]

hi, my name's firza. i really confused about making an essay, because i've never made it before. i have to make it to registration to college. they told me to make an essay about myself. may you check my essay. and i wish you give me some advice. thank you :D

this is my essay,

I was grown up in the middle of a contractor's life, my father, who is working in building environment. There's so many house sketch design in my father's room that always make me so enthusiastic, and that's why I really exited in architecture. Beside that, my sister took quantity surveying for her subject in college, that's make me more exited to choose architecture for my dream continuance. I always think how to make it to be true, so I studied as hard as I can.

I'm naturally a Muslim since I was born. My father and my mother have strong faith in Islam. So they always teach me about it very well and made me really believe in Islam as the truth religion until I die. Everything we do, it has some rules to do the right or wrong thing, and we can't doubt it.

When I was in second grade in high school, I went to Japan for student exchange program as delegation student from North Sumatera. And I also made my class' year book design. I'm good in computing and design. After I graduated from high school, beside I study at home, I made an online shop on a social website for getting pocket money