Posts by rickym

rickym

Dec 9, 2010

Undergraduate / Ietls essay: Should bottled water be banned by governments? [2]

the only suggestion that I have is where you say PET im going to assume that you mean petroleum, and in an essay i would not abbreviate anything.

rickym

Dec 8, 2010

Book Reports / "Oedipus the king" was a puppet of the gods or master of his own fate - thesis? [4]

thank you sorry about my post tho, the post is the prompt for the essay lol i failed

rickym

Dec 8, 2010

Undergraduate / Does age matter?---my main essay for Common App [7]

i believe your essay is very well written. there is one thing i would change, but that is me and depending on your teachers you may not have to, the word loser. i would change this to outcast, or something like that.

rickym

Dec 8, 2010

Book Reports / "Oedipus the king" was a puppet of the gods or master of his own fate - thesis? [4]

Was oedipus a puppet of the gods or master of his own fate? In other words, did the people who lived in ancient Greek culture believe that they had control over their own lives or did they believe that their lives were controlled by the gods?