Writing Feedback / TOEFL: Boys and girls should attend separate schools [11]

TOEFL: Boys and girls should attend separate schools
The single gender schools don't exist in my country. Here we have only mixed gender schools. Thus, this topic is unfamiliar to me. I'm not acquainted to anyone graduated from such kind of school. So this fact may have a great influence on my point of view.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL: Boys and girls should attend separate schools [11]

Thank you Bobur. I appreciate your help.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL: Boys and girls should attend separate schools [11]

Haste makes waste
In my opinion, haste is not such a bad thing as many think. Everyone will agree, that a person - "like a fire" manages to make many different kind of jobs at the same time, while some people can't manage to do even one thing properly.

There is a moment in everybody's life when ...

Writing Feedback / TOEFL: Boys and girls should attend separate schools [11]

Thank you Bobur. I'll do my best the next time.