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Dec 21, 2010
Undergraduate / "all the drama that is prerequisite to being a teenager" essay on self description [5]

Hi there, thanks for your comments of my post. I rewrite your experience. i love your story. hopefully, you will not feel offensive. If I really do, please accept my apology.

A seventeen-year-old girl from India, granted observational privileges in the OBGYN department of Chambersburg Hospital, Pennsylvania, tries hard to live and weaves in and out in the patient rooms until a woman in labor crumpled her hand. A quick and pungent pain falls on her, but none of which cannot be compared to the emptiness and loneness of the first quarter of her life without the company of her parents. That is the destiny of an immigrant family. A couple, who can barely afford the rent in America, leaves a six-month-old child to their widowed mother, making it to grow alone at the bottom of the caste system. Her life was so disrupted and distressful until she sees the woman under the light in the operation room. The sweet crying sound of the baby makes her like a flying bird, with aerial view covering the whole down below. She is a freeman now. She leads how life is filled with chaos and confusion; lives, still, will find the way out.

Living through the darkness as a child, Telugu, given the same name as 'rain' in India dialect, is now more actively communicative with people. Diligent doctors performing unique operation, busy nurses caring for every detail and anesthetized patients waiting on the bed, all friends in the hospital have their own stories, teaching and supplying her with chances to grow up. To accept who she was, and try to seize every single day in her life, that is how she views this world now. In the path of human life, they might stumble, taking the wrong route. Sometime they might come across a jam. But never mind, they will ultimately approach the ends. Bitter or sweet, it always need yourself to create and taste.
bellatsai1030   
Dec 20, 2010
Writing Feedback / Studying literature and history is more important than mathematics and science [3]

Contemporary students, to survive in the competitive industrial society, should learn from miscellaneous subjects to absorb as much knowledge as possible. The application of mathematics and science in engineering and medicine has turned our hard lives more convenient, efficient, and improved quality of our life. Literature and history, supplying students through language with chances to have better understanding about our good selves and preventing repetition of unpleasant experience in the future, are no less in important than modern techniques and math

Human beings, benefiting from the development of engineering and medicine, through the subjects of mathematics and science, enjoy convenience and have made the world a better place to live. Even with prosperous abundance, people, nowadays, are contagious of feeing hopelessness and emptiness, longing for the freedom and peaceful in their souls. All the light from outside would not make people feel bright; listening to the silent in our hearts is the key to our lives.

Cognitive development and ego enhancement by language are of critical importance. In the studying of literature and history, students, through the mental discipline, can sharpen their minds and learn how to penetrate human nature through the abstract and meditative process, making it easier to figure out the existence and beauty of good selves and the true meaning of life. Absorbed in studies of chronology, pupils experience the incidents in the book and learn lessons from the past. In contrast to science and logic, which centers on mechanical and material world and gives contributions to society, literature and history provide us with valuable knowledge to comprehend the hidden meaning of human life, to approach human mind and echo events in the past and avoid undesired results from the history.
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