reynabeige
Dec 31, 2010
Undergraduate / ("Princeton in the Nation's Service") How to Improve Princeton Supplement Essay? [30]
your essay is great - but as a sidepoint, what have you done to show that you're fighting hate?
you say this, but there's no concrete example of you doing so. the essay would be more credible if you provided some examples. assertions are all fine and dandy, but i think the AO would find a couple of examples just a little more convincing.
all the best!
your essay is great - but as a sidepoint, what have you done to show that you're fighting hate?
But hate will wither when those who suffer silently speak up and demand respect, as I have.
you say this, but there's no concrete example of you doing so. the essay would be more credible if you provided some examples. assertions are all fine and dandy, but i think the AO would find a couple of examples just a little more convincing.
all the best!