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Omni   
Dec 28, 2006
Essays / MAJOR HELP REQUIRED [Perception Vs. Perspective] [6]

I'd really like to thank everyone for helping me. I'll certainly use this to help me out.

And Im appreciative of any kind of help I get. Thank you Dee, and Sarah!
Omni   
Dec 25, 2006
Essays / MAJOR HELP REQUIRED [Perception Vs. Perspective] [6]

Hello everyone!

My assignment is to write a paper regarding the differences in how people view a certain situation and what they conclude of it.

For example, there is a boy who picked up a candy from a shelve at a store and put it in his pocket

-A bystander would say that he is stealing
-The mother would say that he's just "holding" it in his pocket
etc.

I've titled my essay: Perception Vs. Perspective
and this is my intro:

Humans are as particular in their perception as are pathogens the cells that make us up.

What we all have in common is that we all have the uniqueness in what we see. In an experiment that was done regarding the court, approximately 50 people were put in a room, with the lights turned off and one man ran into the room throwing a few things out in the room, and stealing something. At the end of this, the 50 people were told to write down what they thought had happened, and from the 50 people, not two had written down the same thing. This goes to show how different we all are in perception and perspective.

As you read it, you'll see how childish it is. Can anyone help me rewrite this intro? I do plan on using different analogies and a different example (or no example at all) to make this sound smarter.

Thanks
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