NSRP
Jan 4, 2011
Undergraduate / "Nursing and the naval reserve" - Contribution to Student Life Personal Statement [3]
Thanks Codric for the input = )
Thanks Codric for the input = )
NSRP
Jan 2, 2011
Undergraduate / "Nursing and the naval reserve" - Contribution to Student Life Personal Statement [3]
Hello everyone I am to make a personal statement regarding what I can contribute to the student life and need help and grammar. Thank you very much:
Max Word: 250
Nursing and the naval reserve share a lot of things in common in order to be an effective unit. Both value team work to accomplish a given task efficiently. Also both value a person's ability and willingness to assume a leadership role, whenever the need arises. As a peer councilor I am trained to provide support to peers who have questions about sex, sexuality, LGBTQ and sexual health. I am also trained to happily refer peers to proper services, clinics, support groups and resources within the university environment and the community at large. A valuable resource for those who have basic questions on the given topics and are afraid or shy to go to a clinic. As a graduate of technical school in the field of Automation and Robotics I received extensive training on the fields of hydraulics, pneumatics, electronics and electricity. Fields that have wide ranging application including nursing. Hydraulic and pneumatic principles are essential when dealing with bodily fluids. Electrical principles are essential when dealing with brain and heart activities. Electronic principles are heavily utilized in both the operation and maintenance of equipments heavily used in healthcare environments. As a member of a visible minority I can further add to the multicolor diversity. I can offer insight into Asian cultures, values, and perspectives. As a student of mathematics I can happily offer assistance to others having trouble with mathematical concepts such as derivatives, integrations and statistics to name a few. A very useful skill to have since it is heavily utilized in nursing when it comes to determining such things as blood pressure, flow and period just to name a few.
Hello everyone I am to make a personal statement regarding what I can contribute to the student life and need help and grammar. Thank you very much:
Max Word: 250
Nursing and the naval reserve share a lot of things in common in order to be an effective unit. Both value team work to accomplish a given task efficiently. Also both value a person's ability and willingness to assume a leadership role, whenever the need arises. As a peer councilor I am trained to provide support to peers who have questions about sex, sexuality, LGBTQ and sexual health. I am also trained to happily refer peers to proper services, clinics, support groups and resources within the university environment and the community at large. A valuable resource for those who have basic questions on the given topics and are afraid or shy to go to a clinic. As a graduate of technical school in the field of Automation and Robotics I received extensive training on the fields of hydraulics, pneumatics, electronics and electricity. Fields that have wide ranging application including nursing. Hydraulic and pneumatic principles are essential when dealing with bodily fluids. Electrical principles are essential when dealing with brain and heart activities. Electronic principles are heavily utilized in both the operation and maintenance of equipments heavily used in healthcare environments. As a member of a visible minority I can further add to the multicolor diversity. I can offer insight into Asian cultures, values, and perspectives. As a student of mathematics I can happily offer assistance to others having trouble with mathematical concepts such as derivatives, integrations and statistics to name a few. A very useful skill to have since it is heavily utilized in nursing when it comes to determining such things as blood pressure, flow and period just to name a few.
NSRP
Dec 31, 2010
Undergraduate / "I used to giggle at doctors" - JHU Supplement #1 [6]
If you are having difficulties finding reasons why you choose philosophy is best to just focus on one which you have very strong reasons for - in this case biology or you could use some of your philosophy knowledge to argue why you have chosen biology and in turn say that through philosophy I was able to reason out why I have chosen biology ... and thus the reason why philosophy is my second choice.
Hope that help in some way ... = )
If you are having difficulties finding reasons why you choose philosophy is best to just focus on one which you have very strong reasons for - in this case biology or you could use some of your philosophy knowledge to argue why you have chosen biology and in turn say that through philosophy I was able to reason out why I have chosen biology ... and thus the reason why philosophy is my second choice.
Hope that help in some way ... = )
NSRP
Dec 31, 2010
Undergraduate / there is no "short-cuts" in our life - Strong determination - MIT [13]
np ... we are all here to help one another ... lots of success = )
np ... we are all here to help one another ... lots of success = )
NSRP
Dec 31, 2010
Undergraduate / there is no "short-cuts" in our life - Strong determination - MIT [13]
Your answers to the first and second questions are good but your approach to the questions I am not sure if it is proper.
Focus more on the attribute of being honest and what it means to you personally. Try to reduce the quotations like for example:
... later, my friend left the group and come to me. "Come, follow me. I have something to share with you. Don't tell anyone else, we have got the answers!"
Could be re-written as :
... later my friend left the group and approached me. He wanted me to follow him to share with me the answers to the coming exam ...
The same approach should go for the second question.
I think it is best you describe what took place rather than show dialogues of what happened.
Hope it help in any way = )
Your answers to the first and second questions are good but your approach to the questions I am not sure if it is proper.
Focus more on the attribute of being honest and what it means to you personally. Try to reduce the quotations like for example:
... later, my friend left the group and come to me. "Come, follow me. I have something to share with you. Don't tell anyone else, we have got the answers!"
Could be re-written as :
... later my friend left the group and approached me. He wanted me to follow him to share with me the answers to the coming exam ...
The same approach should go for the second question.
I think it is best you describe what took place rather than show dialogues of what happened.
Hope it help in any way = )
NSRP
Dec 31, 2010
Undergraduate / "experienced poverty and hardship" - Nursing Entrance Personal Statement [6]
Thanks a lot lucky mimi8592 ... your comment will surely help = )
Thanks a lot lucky mimi8592 ... your comment will surely help = )
NSRP
Dec 30, 2010
Undergraduate / "academic achievements and all the reputation" - WHY RICE? [4]
Sounds good but some of the sentence are a bit confusing such as:
"But it was only when I came acrosswith a Rice student's video about her Hispanic Culture show that I did more research about Rice."
I guess what you are trying to say is (I could be wrong):
It was when I came across a Rice student's video about her Hispanic Culture which motivated me to further research what Rice U is all about.
Sounds good but some of the sentence are a bit confusing such as:
"But it was only when I came across
I guess what you are trying to say is (I could be wrong):
It was when I came across a Rice student's video about her Hispanic Culture which motivated me to further research what Rice U is all about.
NSRP
Dec 29, 2010
Undergraduate / "experienced poverty and hardship" - Nursing Entrance Personal Statement [6]
Hi everyone. I am to write a personal statement of my skills, strength and interest for a nursing entrance and need some help with regards to grammar and sentence structures. Thank you for all the help:
Nursing Application - Assistance With Grammar
I am suppose to write a personal statement about the skills, strengths and interests that will make me a good candidate for the nursing program. Need help with grammar for the following. Thank you very much:
Max words: 250
Having been a student for most of my life, I have amassed qualities that make me a prime candidate for your nursing program. For instance as a student of life sciences I have learned good observational skills. Then as a naval reservist I developed physical skills and as a Filipino-Canadian I am fluent in two languages. Finally as a peer councilor I gained through training emotional skills. These are all skills essential for a successful nurse to have. First a nurse must be able to spot if something is out of the ordinary especially in patient's condition. Second a nurse must be strong to be able to handle the physical demands of nursing. Finally a nurse must be caring, understanding and non-judgmental since patients comes from all walks of life.
Being bilingual is a strength of mine that I cherish dearly since it allows me access and exposure to numerous cultures. Thus greatly enhancing my understanding of the world and its people. But having an open mind is by far the greatest strength I posses because it enable me to learn new and interesting things. Thus I was able to try new things I never thought I could such as become a naval reservist.
Having experienced poverty and hardship first hand brought about my great interest in humanism. This lead me to pursue higher education and be involve in the Red Cross. For an educated person can reach further in life and do more for those who are in need.
Hi everyone. I am to write a personal statement of my skills, strength and interest for a nursing entrance and need some help with regards to grammar and sentence structures. Thank you for all the help:
Nursing Application - Assistance With Grammar
I am suppose to write a personal statement about the skills, strengths and interests that will make me a good candidate for the nursing program. Need help with grammar for the following. Thank you very much:
Max words: 250
Having been a student for most of my life, I have amassed qualities that make me a prime candidate for your nursing program. For instance as a student of life sciences I have learned good observational skills. Then as a naval reservist I developed physical skills and as a Filipino-Canadian I am fluent in two languages. Finally as a peer councilor I gained through training emotional skills. These are all skills essential for a successful nurse to have. First a nurse must be able to spot if something is out of the ordinary especially in patient's condition. Second a nurse must be strong to be able to handle the physical demands of nursing. Finally a nurse must be caring, understanding and non-judgmental since patients comes from all walks of life.
Being bilingual is a strength of mine that I cherish dearly since it allows me access and exposure to numerous cultures. Thus greatly enhancing my understanding of the world and its people. But having an open mind is by far the greatest strength I posses because it enable me to learn new and interesting things. Thus I was able to try new things I never thought I could such as become a naval reservist.
Having experienced poverty and hardship first hand brought about my great interest in humanism. This lead me to pursue higher education and be involve in the Red Cross. For an educated person can reach further in life and do more for those who are in need.