truonghong
Sep 5, 2008
Writing Feedback / Desbribing a person - Julian, my soul mate [6]
Hi,
Thank you for your explanation, Gloria!
Hi,
Thank you for your explanation, Gloria!
truonghong
Sep 5, 2008
Writing Feedback / essay on describing a friend [3]
Thank you so much for your help, Gloria!!I'll remember that!
Best regards,
Hong
Thank you so much for your help, Gloria!!I'll remember that!
Best regards,
Hong
truonghong
Sep 4, 2008
Writing Feedback / Desbribing a person - Julian, my soul mate [6]
Hi, Gloria!
I'm a newer here. I happened to see this web when trying to find some information for my writing. I find it a very useful writing resource. I've just read Debora's essay and wonder why you used "He is also so altruistic and patient, so that he hardly ever has time for himself." instead of "He is also so altruistic and patient that hardly ever has time for himself"? "so that" usually begins a clause of purpose, doesn't it? But this clause isn't that kind!
Thanks!
Hi, Gloria!
I'm a newer here. I happened to see this web when trying to find some information for my writing. I find it a very useful writing resource. I've just read Debora's essay and wonder why you used "He is also so altruistic and patient, so that he hardly ever has time for himself." instead of "He is also so altruistic and patient that hardly ever has time for himself"? "so that" usually begins a clause of purpose, doesn't it? But this clause isn't that kind!
Thanks!
truonghong
Sep 4, 2008
Writing Feedback / essay on describing a friend [3]
Hi, please have a look at my essay on describing a friend and give me some feedback!thanks!
I think that i am very lucky because i have a lot of friends. Among my best friends is Mai. She is 16 years old. we live in the same village . She is my neighbor and we are now classmates, so we have been friends for so long.
Mai is tall and slim. She has long black hair. she has got an oval face with big bright eyes, a high nose and a small mouth. Mai is very beautiful, especially when she smiles. She is helpful, caring and honest. When her friends have difficulties, she always tries her best to help them. although we nearly have the same tastes and interests, we have some different characters. I am sociable and enjoy telling jokes. Unlike me, Mai is quite reserved and likes peace and quietness in the library. But there is mutual trust and a perfect sympathy between us, so we are very close friends. Mai is one of the best students in my class but she is always modest. She is also responsible and careful. I like working with her. She tries her best to finish her work. I think as time goes by, our friendship will be deeper and deeper.
Hi, please have a look at my essay on describing a friend and give me some feedback!thanks!
I think that i am very lucky because i have a lot of friends. Among my best friends is Mai. She is 16 years old. we live in the same village . She is my neighbor and we are now classmates, so we have been friends for so long.
Mai is tall and slim. She has long black hair. she has got an oval face with big bright eyes, a high nose and a small mouth. Mai is very beautiful, especially when she smiles. She is helpful, caring and honest. When her friends have difficulties, she always tries her best to help them. although we nearly have the same tastes and interests, we have some different characters. I am sociable and enjoy telling jokes. Unlike me, Mai is quite reserved and likes peace and quietness in the library. But there is mutual trust and a perfect sympathy between us, so we are very close friends. Mai is one of the best students in my class but she is always modest. She is also responsible and careful. I like working with her. She tries her best to finish her work. I think as time goes by, our friendship will be deeper and deeper.