Undergraduate / ARGENTINA - CMC Leadership Essay [6]

I love your personal motto. I'm going to memorize it!
I never knew about the Cappies program. It's very interesting!

I think you should definitely add a final sentence at the end. You expanded each section of your motto, and having a final sentence that sum up your point will make your essay stronger.

Also, could you maybe elaborate on Messi wearing the captain's armband thing? I don't exactly see why it's mentioned.. Is it to provide an example for Messi's humility and grace?

Being a Cappies critic, you must be great at writing. Well, your essay testifies to it. I'm the "kerazy kid" whose essay you just commented on, and I agree with you my essay is way too long! It's stressing me out. I'll work on abridging it, can you look at it again after I work on it?

Thanks!