sasalbyongari
Dec 31, 2010
Undergraduate / BU Supp: Leaps and Bounds - spectacular progress or growth in a big way. [6]
By definition, if one does something in leaps and bounds, they are prone to making spectacular progress or growth in a big way. - "One is singular. I know that we tend to say "one" and "they" together, but it is actually wrong in writing.
I think you did great job with the essay. It really shows you know about the school. But I'm afraid that the second paragraph contains TOO much info that it seems like you "copied and pasted" the whole thing (not that I am accusing you of it) you might want to tone it down a little regarding the details and add something personal in the essay. Again, great job, and I would appreciate it if you can read my princeton supplement as well! Thanks.
By definition, if one does something in leaps and bounds, they are prone to making spectacular progress or growth in a big way. - "One is singular. I know that we tend to say "one" and "they" together, but it is actually wrong in writing.
I think you did great job with the essay. It really shows you know about the school. But I'm afraid that the second paragraph contains TOO much info that it seems like you "copied and pasted" the whole thing (not that I am accusing you of it) you might want to tone it down a little regarding the details and add something personal in the essay. Again, great job, and I would appreciate it if you can read my princeton supplement as well! Thanks.