Writing Feedback / Recent violent rampage essay [2]

Recent rampage at virgina tech University once again draw everybody's attention at the violence in youths especially those in university s . Everybody have his own opinion, there is lot in both print and electronic media as well. But what i infer and the answer all the questions is only one word loneliness and for loneliness responsible is our modern life style.

By modern life style i would stay dependency on electronic resources rather than human being. I would say each gadget bring in its share of loneliness in one's life. I'll like to bring attention to our daily chores. If ones goes to gym or a walk never forgot to bring an ipod and i believe that is the worst enemy when you do not talk to anybody never share emotions. You missed a wonderful opportunity to express your feeling and let frustration out with surrounding people. Another thing is the music goes to your brain through your ears, because we all know about the quality of music we are getting now a days. Then i don't think most of families still have tradition of family dinner. Rest of the damage is done by internet where it's pretty easy to find and share poisonous ideas with like minded people. The only thing i would imply is get out of the room, take off your ipod sit with family share your ideas day's experiences make friends and be friendly.

Writing Feedback / Feedback: An incident report written specifically by a bus driver [2]

This incident took place on my bus no.115 while on my regular route from downtown to main street.
It was about 5a.m. and i was driving along the main st. approching toward main st. stop, when i heard people shouting and screaming "stop the bus, stop the bus", when i looked through the mirror what i found was pretty disturbing. A white male about 6' tall was held down by a group of regular commuters. So i pulled my bus on the side of the road stopped it. As i approached to that group and incident as described by almost all of them was pretty shocking. That young thug looked like fella snatched purse from an old women in her 80's and tried to ran away as the bus going to stop. But Luckily intervened by closely standing a young smartian and then held by the group. So i called dispatcher described incident and asked him to inform police so that we turned him in. But as advised by dispatcher i drove my bus to nearby police station, which was only a block away, because the purse snacher wasn't so agrresive and nobody from bus object either.

After turning him in and filling report i proceed to my route. But this whole incident cost 30 min. delay to operation.

Writing Feedback / Gang Violence. "There will be an escalation in violence on streets" [2]

Gang Violence Essay

The level of violence in cities seems to be reaching its higher levels with each and every single day.The newspaper in my hand with a statement from police chief "There will be an escalation in violence on streets, because of disputed drug deal between two gangs in Lower mainland".

The distressing part is these cons always safely get away, but most of the time are innocent bystanders who have to pay price. Because usually these targeted shootings happen on public places. It could be park with innocent joggers, night time bars packed with innocent chaps happen to be there to relax and have fun after a whole day long work hard, and driveway shooting for targeted house could have hit neighbour er and walking by pedestrians .

I think only solution to this problem is by educating more and more youths about the consequeces they could face after getting into gang style life.

Writing Feedback / short essay for review for police test [2]

Thanks everbody for time in advance. I am preparing police test so please all kind of reviews are welcome. This is my first time posting and essay is preety small as well.

thankyou

Customer Service

Providing customer service is the main responsibility for every business in market. Customer service is not about giving smile, assistance in finding products and putting some people at a counter with a big customer service board.

Real customer service is far more than that. But i believe is businesses should be responsible for purchased product for at least one year. Within a year product should be denied of taking back unless it has been used pretty rough.