Writing Feedback / schools don't prepare young people for life in the real life. [4]

everybody has their own obligations, for example, children have to go to the school to acquire knowledge. also, without education people cant find job and earn money. however, does school prepare young people for life in the real world?

on the one hand, school teaches us how to read, write, calculate and other important things. in school we are learning language that we could communicate in other countries. furthermore, subjects at school, such as, history, geography, literature and social studies, only raise our knowledge.

on the other hand, in life is more important things than money and work, for example, love, relationships, health and friendship, these things we have to learn by ourselfs. schools don't teach us how to stand up for yourself or how to love people. moreover, each people has their own proffesion and every proffesion has their own obligations, most of all, people don't need to know all 15 subjects to get job.

to sum up, schools don't prepare young people for life in the real world. in my opinion,there is a lot of things we have to learn by ourselfs. also, in every proffesion is special things you need to know and these things you can learn by practising. school only teaches elementary things and increases our knowledge.

Writing Feedback / "My sociable mother" - describe a person you admire [NEW]

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Please tell me about this essay I wrote about a person I admire, and I choose 2 characteristics that describe his personality.

i am going to write about my mother. shi is called vija and she is in her middle thirties. she lives in riga with me and my father. we have a big house, actually it is too big for our small family. she works in big company as an accountant. my mother loves floristic, it is her hobby. she likes exotic food, especially sushi, but she cant stand boring things, such as chess.

she has an oval face shape, red lipstick on her lips, her blond hair is always curly and she has a big round blue eyes. she has a great taste ans she is very fashionable. i think she is really good-looking women. i admire her for her personality which is a mix of honesty and strong faith in herself, cause and effect. she is kind but strickt. she is hard-working, for example, she often works at nights.

she is very sociable, she has a lot of friends ands everyones love her, ecpecially i. she gets on with most of people and is very patient, particulary when i ask for a help at studies.