Scholarship / to access world-class bachelor of social science degree program [3]

On majoring in economics, jobs will be within my reach as Hong Kong, with <plenty/other word of your choice> of multinational financial institutions, is the heart of international finance.

Gaining a Hong Kong work experience will help me strengthening my leadership skills and self-confidence preparing me as an entrepreneur.

Following two years of work experience in Hong Kong, I plan of coming to come home and setting up a firm in the rural areas of Bangladesh, creating employment for thedisadvantagedsubstitute a better word people. The company will be extended further to an English medium school providing free education to the children of the employees and other underprivileged people children .

Towards achieving my dream of making peace like the noble prizewinner Prof. Muhammad Yunus, the scholarship will play its bigger part. -- Nothing in your application is twards making peace. Besides, you don't really "make" peace.