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sara213   
Feb 8, 2009
Writing Feedback / "The Great Gatsby is seen in two ways" - Help with Essay Writing - [10]

I don't mean to be rude, but help me understand this copy and paste rule?

The last time one of the mods removed the essay but they never gave a reason why it was removed ect... You should at least explain why it was removed and for what reasons, so I know what is going on.

please and thanks.

PS...thanks Sean and Kevin
sara213   
Feb 7, 2009
Writing Feedback / "The Great Gatsby is seen in two ways" - Help with Essay Writing - [10]

Hey, i was wondering if someone could look at this essay for me and tell me if it sounds like it could be an Argumentative Essay.

Question:

Chose a theme that, in your opinion, answers the question "what is the great gatsby really about?" In a argumentative essay, explain the importance of this theme and why it should take priority over two of the other themes discussed in this lesson.

ESSAY:

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ESSAY:

The Great Gatsby is written by F. Scott Fitzgerald. The book depicts the post world war one era in the nineteen twenties and is about how the American Dream is corrupted by easy money and relaxed social values. Double Vision also helps to depict the sense of how the American dream has been corrupted. Double Vision is classified as one object that can be viewed in two opposing ways. Throughout the novel there are many ideas of characters, places and events that represent a double vision. Those ideas can be seen as either romantic, glamorous and exciting or crude, corrupt and even disgusting.

New York is the place that represents, in The Great Gatsby, as an uninhabitable, amoral quest for money and pleasure. This is where a double vision applies to New York. Not only can it be a place where money and pleasure are gained, but also can be a place of danger and corruptness. By example people go there to do illegal business, Gatsby does most of his business in New York. That is where he met Mr. Wolfshiem. One of Mr. Wolfshiem's friends was shot outside a hotel. New York is a place in the novel for the characters to go to have fun and escape reality. That is why none of the characters in the novel live in New York city.

The midwest is represented with the traditional social values and morals. It is the opposite of what is happening on the east coast. Nick says in the end of the story that he felt that the east coast is corrupt and it makes an honest person turn to a dishonest person. Therefore he wants to return to the midwest. He hopes to regain social and moral values he lost while living on the east coast.

Double vision is also present in the characters with in the novel. Daisy has a double vision about her. On one hand she is the beautiful and a glamorous women but she can also be deceiving. Her love is shallow. Daisy loved Gatsby very much, but he was sent out overseas to war. After only waiting for him for about six months she then married Tom Buchanan from Chicago.

The narrator doesn't get away from the double vision either. Nick is a honest man from the midwest. His father told him to reserve judgment on people because if he didn't then he would misunderstand them. So he took his fathers advice to heart and that is why he is the one that is the narrator in this book. He has the ability to reserve judgment on people. However Nick has his double vision moments. He considers himself as an honest man however he isn't very honest to the girl that he loves. He couldn't tell her that he didn't love her and then he ran off to New York. Where he continued to tell her that he loved in letters. He had a affair with a girl in New York while still not being able to break things off with the girl in the midwest. Then he met Jordan and it wasn't until they break up that Jordan then calls him out on his dishonesty. Which of course he dismisses quickly.

Gatsby's parties were glamourous when they were congregated. Many people came from New York just to attend his parties. His parties were only held in an attempt to lure Daisy to them. Gatsby had hoped that she would have heard of them and then she would come to the party but his attempts to lure her failed. His parties did not end on a happy note however. People were drunk or angry after wards making the parties seem like a corrupt and crude place to be afterwards. However Gatsby continued to have them almost every weekend. To bring interesting people to his house for a few hour's on the weekend. It kind of makes him feel not so lonely. Since he lives in such a huge house on his own.

Double Vision in The Great Gatsby can be seen in two ways, glamourous, romantic, exciting or as crude, corrupt and even disgusting. Fitzgerald's novel was a personal reflection on his own life. He used double vision to show how one thing can look and feel the same but in context doesn't actually represent for ones actions. In this we reveal how reveal how true the double vision is applied to various people, places and events within the story. In conclusion at all times during the duration of the novel. Double vision was present in subtle ways and in some ways it did represent how he felt about certain people in general.
sara213   
Feb 7, 2009
Book Reports / Death of the Salesman - essay and creative writing [5]

Nope, it is only in my notebook. I wrote that whole scene up as part of a creative writing question. Which required you to write a script between Stanley and Happy after Willy dies using all the theatrical support (not sure what it is called EG... curtains fall)

I got a decent mark on it too. ^_^

Although I didn't really like the book much. It was very hard to finish.
sara213   
Feb 6, 2009
Undergraduate / Do I have to take MCAT for Pharmacy ? [6]

Pharmacy has something called the PCAT exam.

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sara213   
Feb 6, 2009
Book Reports / Death of the Salesman - essay and creative writing [5]

I have one other one that i did.

it was the creative writing question, don't remember which one though.
This one:

Stanley is polishing glasses. He looks up as Happy enters, stage right. He puts a glass in it's place as Happy takes a seat at the bar.

Happy: Stanley, pass me a drink will ya.

Stanley, getting a drink ready: I haven't seen you in a while. passes Happy a drink

Happy: I've been occupied with work really.

Stanley, nodding: You missed honey the other day.

Happy, shrugs: There is always another beautiful one to come in at anytime right? then he takes a sip of his drink.

Stanley: That's true but a real beauty like her doesn't come every once and a while.

Happy, shakes his head: There are more beautiful creatures out there. Not only her you know, Stanley.

Stanley: Of course. Say about that last night you came with your father.

Happy: Yeah what about it?

Stanley: Well, I was wondering about that night.

Happy: Oh and what about that night?

Stanley: I don't meant to intrude on your family business but your father wasn't really himself that night. In fact I found him in the bathroom on his knees.

Happy: You did. Did you? he finishes his drink and sets it aside.

Stanley, taking the glass Happy had finished: He was going on about plantting seeds and he need to find a store that sells them. I tell you i was quite worried for him.

Happy: Yeah well...there is nothing you could do for him. Pass me another drink will you?"

Stanley, obeys and fetches another glass and beings to mix a drink for him: I'm sorry that there was nothing much I could do. he passes the drink to Happy.

Happy: What can you be sorry for it is not your fault. Besides like I said he is in a better place.

Stanley: Well I tried to help him out.

Happy: That's good it didn't do him much good to plant seeds at night time. takes a sip of his drink

Stanley: You know you could have brought him home instead of leaving him there.

Happy: Oh, pop was doing fine. He had a fun time.

Stanley, sighing: For some reason I'm not sure he did. He seemed to be distressed about something.

Happy: Distressed is not the word.

Stanley, cleaning another glass: He is a poor old man. I felt sorry for him. But i can't begin to understand why you left him here that night.

Happy: I was out painting the town with two fine creatures and my brother. My brother needed some cheering up after the plan had fallen through.

Stanley, putting the clean glasses away: Yes, but how about your father? I sent him off on his own. He was distraught on finding seeds so he could plant them. At such a late time the man was thinking about seeds.

Happy, taking a sip from the glass: He was trying to plant a garden in the dark. he glances down at his drink that is in his hands.

Stanley: Oh, really.

Happy, nods in agreement: Mother was upset that we came home. He was out in the garden planting seeds.

Stanley: Planting in the middle of the night. That is crazy.

Happy: You are telling me.

Stanley: How is he now?

Happy, a little sadden: Oh there are many things that you would be surprised to hear. Many, many things.

Stanley: Oh? you don't say. Well you didn't tell me how he is yet you know?

Happy: He is dead.

Stanley, shocked: What when did that happen?

Happy: That is the same night that we left this very resturant.

Stanley: I'm very sorry to hear about that.

Happy, takes another sip from his drink then places his hand on the counter banging it hard: I have sworn to him that i will do right by picking up from where he left off. he then turns to look at the entrance.

Stanley: That is good that you choose to honour your father like that.

Happy, shrugs: it's the best i can do. I will work my hardest to get ahead in life. and then to become number one! and maybe even get married.

Stanley: Will you do it?

Happy: Yeah.

Stanley: You know you shouldn't have left him. He really needed his boys to help him.

Happy, shaking his head: I don't think it would have made a difference.

Stanley, finishing cleaning the final glass puts it away: It could have.

Happy, gets up from the stool: It was nice to chat with you Stanley and have a few drinks. But i got to go. I have a big date tonight. he exits stage left.

Stanley watches him leave. the lights fade on the bar.

curtains fall

sara213   
Feb 2, 2009
Book Reports / Death of the Salesman - essay and creative writing [5]

Yeah I am. :D

yay...someone else who is doing the same thing. Yeah I'm in unit 3 but I had to redo unit 2 essay questions about The Great Gatsby, as you can see. After i finish that then i'm going to start unit 3 essay questions.

I only did one essay for The Death of A salesman:

In the novel, Death of a Salesman by Arther Miller, there are few motifs that carry along the play. Only one of the motifs will be discussed. That motif is the one of Diamonds. Diamonds in the play represent, wealth, success and the ability to pass material items to his family. This is something that the man character in the play has failed at. The following quotest will be examined: "You guys! There was a man started with the clothes on his back and ended up with diamond mines.", "Principally diamond mines." , "...It's who you know and the smile on your face! It's contacts, Ben, contacts! The whole wealth of Alaska passes over the lunch table at the Commodore Hotel, and that's the wonder, the wonder of this country, that a man can end with diamonds here on the basis of being liked!..", "Oh, Ben, that's the whole beauty of it! I see it like a diamond, shining in the dark, hard and rough, that I can pick up and touch in my hand. Not like --- like an appointment!..." , "The jungle is dark but full of diamonds, Willy." and "It's dark there, but full of diamonds."

Willy is quoted to saying on page forty-one, "You guys! There was a man started with the clothes on his back and ended up with diamond mines." He is telling his boys about the success that their Uncle Ben had discovered while in Africa. The mention of Ben's diamond mines comes after Bernard comes to tell him that Biff was stealing. Willy is reeling with anger and remembers Ben in one of his many memories.

Ben later comes in another memory where he mentions Africa as being: "Principally diamond mines." Later on Willy is still in his memory mode where he remembers telling Ben: "...It's who you know and the smile on your face! It's contacts, Ben, contacts! The whole wealth of Alaska passes over the lunch table at the Commodore Hotel, and that's the wonder, the wonder of this country, that a man can end with diamonds here on the basis of being liked!.." Willy explains to Ben that in order to get diamonds you don't need to walk into the jungle rather it's having contacts and being well liked that will get you diamonds. Diamonds in this quote is referred to with wealth and money.

"Oh, Ben, that's the whole beauty of it! I see it like a diamond, shining in the dark, hard and rough, that I can pick up and touch in my hand. Not like --- like an appointment!..." Willy is gardening in the night time. He has asked Ben for his help in his discussion on whether or not he should commit suicide. Willy says that he knows that the twenty thousand dollars is so close to him that he could reach out and grab it. Hence by diamonds he is talking about the twenty thousand dollars that his family will get when he dies.

Near the end of act two. After Willy had heard a confession from Biff that he loves him. He hears Ben telling him: "The jungle is dark but full of diamonds, Willy." Willy is thinking that by killing himself that he is giving something to his family. Something he wasn't able to do during his life as a salesman. "It's dark there, but full of diamonds." says Ben. As Ben has given him warning that his family might hate him if he did what he is suggesting. Yet again Willy is confident that they won't. He then sees that committing suicide will be giving Biff 'diamonds' or wealth. He justifies with himself that it is the right thing to do and that his son will love him for it. Then finally he takes the plunge and he crashes the car after everyone is sent to bed.

The motif of the diamonds is very important in the play, Death of a Salesman. It signifies wealth and success and as well as Willy's failure as a salesman in the play. He had lost many opportunities to find his diamonds by following his elder brother to Alaska. Which he opted not to do as by a suggestion by Linda. The diamonds motif pushes the story forward through till the very end. It is also the final push for Willy finally decided to kill himself. He sees by doing this for his son he gives him the diamonds that he failed to find.

I'm going to be doing essay questions about King Lear...From lesson 12 key question and Lesson 14, key question.
sara213   
Oct 9, 2008
Writing Feedback / "The Great Gatsby is seen in two ways" - Help with Essay Writing - [10]

Everything in The Great Gatsby is seen in two ways: on the one hand as glamorous, romantic and exciting, and on the other as crude, corrupt or even disgusting. This double vision applies to people, places and events. In a unified essay of 750 - 1000 words, show how this is true, and explain its significance, using specific references to the novel to support your ideas.

*identifies more than three examples of people, places and/or events being views in different and or opposing ways.
*explains the double perspective and supports the explanation with relevant examples; discusses the extent to which the narrator is in and not in gatsby's world.

I had a lot of trouble to decide how i wanted to structure it. I must have tried to rewrite it in various different ways but all ways I could think of including in the essay below i didn't really like.

I also would like to mention that I'm a bet rusty when it comes to essays...the last time that i wrote an essay was I'd say about 8 or 9 years ago. So, now i have to do them again to upgrade my highschool courses.

I was also never really good at essays either.

My questions are:

1) Could I do three examples or more of say: people and events instead of doing places? I think that is what the question is implying anyway.

2) is there a book or relevant article that will help me in writing an essay?

3) anything i may have missed , whether it be small or not, just point it out. Please.

The Great Gatsby was written by F. Scott Fitzgerald, and depicts life in the roaring twenties, this is a term used for the nineteen twenties. Through out the story there is a double vision that applies to people, places and events with in the story. Double vision in the story can be seen as glamourous, romantic, and exciting or as crude, corrupt and disgusting. The significance of the double vision is to depict how the "Roaring Twenties" had two views of viewing life.

People in The Great Gatsby have a standard double vision to them all: Tom Buchanan, Daisy Buchanan and Jay Gatsby. Tom is defiantly one of the least liked character's in the novel. He is a racist, adulterer and reacts violently some or rather most of them times. He even hits Myrtle so far as to break her nose. His character it's self is quite crude to begin with. Eventually as the book progresses, Myrtle is hit by Gatsby's car, that Daisy was driving, and dies. Tom is in shock but then he goes over to handle Wilson. After he has calmed him down he, Nick and Jordan continue back to East Egg. On the way there, Tom sheds some tears; " In a little while I heard a low husky sob and saw that tears were overflowing down his face. 'Goddamn coward!' he whimpered. 'He didn't even stop his car.'" This shows that he was devastated to lose someone as close as Myrtle. He reveals he has genuine romantic feelings for his mistress, but at the same time he is angry with the person who done this.

Daisy the beautiful girl from Louisville, Kentucky whom was very popular with military men at the base located there. However below the beauty she is a careless person, as Nick describes her. Her true love is with money and material luxury making her view of love corrupt in a sense that she only values those items. She also thinks of her daughter as a second thought.

'You ought to see the baby.'
'I'd like to.'
'She's asleep. She's three years old. Haven't you ever seen her?'
'Never.'
'Well, you ought to see her. She's-'

For a brief time she was capable of romantic feelings was when she was with Gatsby for that brief time, before he was shipped for war overseas. She then had given up on waiting and married Tom in nineteen nineteen.

Jay Gatsby had a dream when he returned from war. That was to win back Daisy. He held large glamourous parties at his home on West Egg. He also made sure that the house was facing the opposite of Tom and Daisy's house on East Egg. As well as gain wealth from illegal sources that would be considered corrupt.

Places in The Great Gatsby also have double vision applied to them. New York is a place in novel where they enter it but then leave again. It is said that New York is exciting and can be a place to meet "romantic ladies" as Nick says. However it can also be a dangerous place. People get shot there. Tom and Myrtle choose New York as a place to commit their adultery and as well to fight. " 'Daisy! Daisy! Daisy!' shouted Mrs. Wilson. 'I'll say it when ever I want to! Daisy! Dai-'

Making a short deft movement, Tom Buchanan broke her nose with his open hand."

West Egg is a place where all the inhabitants are all recently wealthy. They also don't have a good sense of taste either. This place is exciting like New York however it is a place that doesn't merit the good taste of the people of East Egg whom have a socially established connections. This makes West Egg seem to be filled with many corrupt individuals.

East Egg is home to people with inherited wealth and an already established social connection unlike the people on West Egg. They are glamourous here. They are also snobs in a way because of their highly established social connection and their good luxurious taste for life and material items. These people can come off as disgusting because of the way they think of other people on the West Egg.

Event's in The Great Gatsby: Gatsby's Parties are large and glamourous. They are parties where you can meet people without being romantic. It is a fun large and exciting party.

Tom's party was small and cluster phobic. People lost each other and found each other then lost each one once again. Nick wanted to escape from the this party but he couldn't find a way out. He also get drunk at this party.

Nick's dinner invite to Tom and Daisy's house, at the being of the book. It seems like an exciting opportunity for Nick to meet his cousin and a old friend of his Tom once again. Things quickly go array when Tom receives a call. When Jordan tells Nick that it is from Tom's mistress he is quite surprised. For Nick to find out in this manner it was quite crude and or corrupt because when Tom and Daisy come back they act as though everything is fine. When really underneath it all it really isn't okay.

Double Vision in The Great Gatsby can be seen in two ways, glamourous, romantic and exciting or crude, corrupt and disgusting. These double visions are seen throughout the story in various forms of people, places and events. It gives off to show how true the double vision is applied to the various parts of the story. In conclusion there is always a small double vision that is seen throughout the novel.
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