Writing Feedback / About me: Sri Lankan but was born in Australia - my first paragraph [5]

Hi I'm Ethan Kody,

I wanted help to make my first few sentences interesting in my essays to captivate my audience at first. I would appreciate ideas of how to make it interesting. Thanks for all the help you put in.

My name is Ethan Kody. I'm Sri Lankan but was born in Australia. My favourite subject is maths but I still enjoy english. My schooling life has been great so far. At my previous school, Buckley Park College, I was strong with english and was an 'A' Grade student. However, I have had many experiences with the language and I have many weaknesses as well.

That was my essay. I hope you can help me

Thanks
Ethan