cbun05
Feb 28, 2011
Undergraduate / "Learning is how we grow." - transfer to UT Austin [3]
It is really long. I would not start an essay saying I'm unsure of what I want to do. You want to prove to these people that you are the best candidate for this position and telling them that you aren't sure is like saying "I'm going to switch majors at least 3 times". Why would they choose you when 50 other applicants know exactly what they want and are willing to do what it takes to get it. Also, don't talk about your drug use. Not sure if it helps, but it's my opinion.
It is really long. I would not start an essay saying I'm unsure of what I want to do. You want to prove to these people that you are the best candidate for this position and telling them that you aren't sure is like saying "I'm going to switch majors at least 3 times". Why would they choose you when 50 other applicants know exactly what they want and are willing to do what it takes to get it. Also, don't talk about your drug use. Not sure if it helps, but it's my opinion.