Undergraduate / "Bright personality, knowledge and soccer team" - for UBC--Bachelor of Science [5]

I think my answer is not very logical, I probability repeated my idea several times. But I don't know how to correct that. Please give me some suggestions. Thank you very much!!^^

The question is given: what qualities do you have that prepare you for success in the Bachelor of Science program?

I develop many qualities that help me success in the Bachelor of Science program. First of all, I have a bright personality and unlimited enthusiasm. I am an outstanding student from childhood which means I have a solid foundation of knowledge. This must have positive impact on my study. Questioning mind play an essential role in studying science, it is general accepted that science is a process of finding the essence of insubstantial semblance, so persist in exploring is the key of scientific research. I have a positive upward and strong self-confidence; I never afraid of difficulties and problems. My passion is the momentum of doing scientific research. My out-of-class activities in high school also contribute to my personal development. I participate student council and the girl's soccer team at my spear time. My role on the student council focused on the organization of social activities for the student body, which helped me develop practical skills like organization, communication and leadership. These skills are all essential to my future successes as a student and engineer because they are the key skills for planning, developing and completing tasks in both educational and professional settings. My position as a member of my school's senior girl's soccer squad taught me the benefits of team spirit and of being a team player, both of which will have a positive influence on how I interact at school and on the job.