Drottni
Mar 15, 2011
Book Reports / About the novel A thousand splendid Suns - Rights of Women [8]
no problem:)
and thanks!
no problem:)
and thanks!
Drottni
Mar 14, 2011
Book Reports / About the novel A thousand splendid Suns - Rights of Women [8]
a few suggestions , in my opinion it should be :
they are banned from laughing loudly, playing sports... instead of to
tells of the lives...
barely have any power instead of have barely any power
you should explain the part about Nana having seizure...explain how it portrays women not having power/control
a few suggestions , in my opinion it should be :
they are banned from laughing loudly, playing sports... instead of to
tells of the lives...
barely have any power instead of have barely any power
you should explain the part about Nana having seizure...explain how it portrays women not having power/control
Drottni
Mar 14, 2011
Undergraduate / "My fondness for children + medical" - Supplementary Application for UBC BSc Program [4]
thanks for the reply and yes I will change the "got"
also I agree with you about the arrogant tone, I will try to fix that up
Thanks a lot!
thanks for the reply and yes I will change the "got"
also I agree with you about the arrogant tone, I will try to fix that up
Thanks a lot!
Drottni
Mar 13, 2011
Undergraduate / "My fondness for children + medical" - Supplementary Application for UBC BSc Program [4]
Hi, these are my answers for the supplementary application questions. I am not sure if they are good enough, or if even good at all. Please help me improve them by providing suggestions and comments. Thank You Very Much!
(it is due by Mar.15.2011...tuesday)
What qualities do you have that prepare you for success in the Bachelor of Science program? (250 words max.)
As a hardworking and consistent honour roll student, I have the essential qualities needed for success in the competitive Bachelor of Science program. Not only am I diligent in my studies, but I am also open-minded and willing to learn. I strive towards excelling at everything I attempt and face challenges with confidence and determination. I have prepared and trained myself for the challenges ahead by working hard in school, achieving excellent grades, and researching about the medical field. My thorough research of a career in pediatrics has given me an idea of my future and I am confident my studies at UBC will allow me to accomplish this goal.
My competitive spirit allows me to push forward with everything I have to ensure I come out on top. My passion for biology has always pulled me towards the medical career and continues to motivate me to succeed as a pediatrician. I value education greatly and organize my time efficiently and productively. Working part time and doing well in school simultaneously has taught me to multitask and organize.
Throughout high school I have strengthened and developed myself by understanding my weaknesses and fixing them. My leadership training has equipped me with excellent communication and organization skills that I continue to develop and perfect. My vision of helping children in need across the world motivates me to strive towards success.
Describe one experience that influenced the kind of science you want to study. (250 words max.)
The panic and fear that I experienced the night my younger sister got ill are still fresh in my mind. As we drove her to the hospital, I sat there holding her feverishly hot hand and feeling completely helpless. Not knowing what was going on inside her tiny body as she struggled for every precious breath was the hardest and most frustrating part for me. My eagerness to help her, to do anything to ease her pain, made me restless in the waiting room. Once she was in the hands of the doctor, I felt slightly relieved, yet my curiosity kept me on edge. I remembered looking around me and realizing how many kids occupied this hospital at this very moment, needing help and care. Later, as the doctor explained to us what had happened, I remember thinking, I want to do that. I want to be able to understand the complex human body well enough to help children in need, ease their pain, and possibly rid them of their illnesses.
My fondness for children had always been present, and after this epiphany, I discovered my passion for biology. The study of how living things work fascinated me above all other subjects in school. To this day, my passion allows me to excel in high school biology. In grade 12 biology I achieved a grade of 96%, and enjoyed every moment of the course. It was in that moment of helplessness that I realized I wanted a life devoted to helping others.
Hi, these are my answers for the supplementary application questions. I am not sure if they are good enough, or if even good at all. Please help me improve them by providing suggestions and comments. Thank You Very Much!
(it is due by Mar.15.2011...tuesday)
What qualities do you have that prepare you for success in the Bachelor of Science program? (250 words max.)
As a hardworking and consistent honour roll student, I have the essential qualities needed for success in the competitive Bachelor of Science program. Not only am I diligent in my studies, but I am also open-minded and willing to learn. I strive towards excelling at everything I attempt and face challenges with confidence and determination. I have prepared and trained myself for the challenges ahead by working hard in school, achieving excellent grades, and researching about the medical field. My thorough research of a career in pediatrics has given me an idea of my future and I am confident my studies at UBC will allow me to accomplish this goal.
My competitive spirit allows me to push forward with everything I have to ensure I come out on top. My passion for biology has always pulled me towards the medical career and continues to motivate me to succeed as a pediatrician. I value education greatly and organize my time efficiently and productively. Working part time and doing well in school simultaneously has taught me to multitask and organize.
Throughout high school I have strengthened and developed myself by understanding my weaknesses and fixing them. My leadership training has equipped me with excellent communication and organization skills that I continue to develop and perfect. My vision of helping children in need across the world motivates me to strive towards success.
Describe one experience that influenced the kind of science you want to study. (250 words max.)
The panic and fear that I experienced the night my younger sister got ill are still fresh in my mind. As we drove her to the hospital, I sat there holding her feverishly hot hand and feeling completely helpless. Not knowing what was going on inside her tiny body as she struggled for every precious breath was the hardest and most frustrating part for me. My eagerness to help her, to do anything to ease her pain, made me restless in the waiting room. Once she was in the hands of the doctor, I felt slightly relieved, yet my curiosity kept me on edge. I remembered looking around me and realizing how many kids occupied this hospital at this very moment, needing help and care. Later, as the doctor explained to us what had happened, I remember thinking, I want to do that. I want to be able to understand the complex human body well enough to help children in need, ease their pain, and possibly rid them of their illnesses.
My fondness for children had always been present, and after this epiphany, I discovered my passion for biology. The study of how living things work fascinated me above all other subjects in school. To this day, my passion allows me to excel in high school biology. In grade 12 biology I achieved a grade of 96%, and enjoyed every moment of the course. It was in that moment of helplessness that I realized I wanted a life devoted to helping others.
