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Mar 16, 2011
Scholarship / Honda Dreams Fund Scholarship Essay [3]

I have drafted an essay for the above-mentioned scholarship. The task is to continue the introductory phrase given : "Honda Dreams Fund is the opportunity I have been waiting for to realize my dreams. Since young I have always aspired to be ...."

This is my introduction. I tried to emphasize my fascination with science from a young age. But, I felt it is weak. Please comment.

Honda Dreams Fund is the opportunity I have been waiting for to realize my dreams. Since young I have always aspired to be a Medical Scientist. I have always excited about studying science which interests me the most. As a kid, I'm curious at the nature of the physical world. Science offers the freedom of thought of asking a question and rationalizing an answer for it. Often, my heart pitters and patters in excitement of discovering something new everyday. My Eureka moments of science are not something to be penned down but to be felt!!
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