Ryane2011
Mar 18, 2011
Undergraduate / "between America and Saudi Arabia" - family history, culture or environment [4]
Thank you so much for your help, i really appreciate it.
Just one more questions. I'm having a bit of trouble figuring out how to end this essay. Removing the last paragraph and replacing it with
"The family atmosphere helped me to take pride in my work. I learned to never give up on trying to achieve my goals. Putting in all my effort, experience and knowledge into what I desire the most will be well worth it at the end of the day."
What do you think about that? Is it good the way it is? Or what should I add?
Once again I really appreciate it..
Thank you so much for your help, i really appreciate it.
Just one more questions. I'm having a bit of trouble figuring out how to end this essay. Removing the last paragraph and replacing it with
"The family atmosphere helped me to take pride in my work. I learned to never give up on trying to achieve my goals. Putting in all my effort, experience and knowledge into what I desire the most will be well worth it at the end of the day."
What do you think about that? Is it good the way it is? Or what should I add?
Once again I really appreciate it..