asmafiqi
Mar 22, 2011
Writing Feedback / "Parents are first" - narrative essay [12]
Please ,check what i wrote below about reply to a job offer and mark my mistakes and make the correct if you can Thanks!
the email questions I recieves!
I have received an email of interest off of an inquiry you had filled out on an ad I had posted on Career Builder. I am responding to your interest, but would like to know a little bit about you and your background before scheduling an interview.
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> Right now I have several clients in the western metro that are in need of a new caregiver or looking to start services soon.
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> 1) Can you please tell me about yourself?
> 2) What do you enjoy about working or spending time with elderly people?
> 3) What hours would you be available to work?
> 4) Do you have reliable transportation, a valid driver's license and automobile insurance?
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This is my reply to the email!
Good morning to you!
I am asma fiqi, I have worked with different companies through my life.Such as , st.jude medical my job was to build medical parts,Delta global service,my job was to take care of the planes such as cleaning , straighting cushion, providing suplies etc. I helped passengers with whatever they needed, helped elder people who needed my assistent when they were flying and so forth.Through my life experience with all the jobs i had,I worked with different people from different back grounds.I also did team work and costumer service.I worked for starbucks and my job was serving people drinking , food and making sure every was happy and satisfied with the service i provided as a costumer service.I like working with elders and needy because I learned that through my culture,helping your neighbors and needy is charty and as a human one supposed to be caring and giving what he/he loves her/him self.I also helped my grandpa who was old and disable for years and i enjoyed helping him with cleaning, cooking and talking to him , listening and so forth. I think i have the potential working with elder people because i am good person , outgoing , compassionate.I think this job is great fit for me because of who I am and the experience that have helping others.Yes, I have valid driver license, a car and i would like to work part time.We can discuss about the hours. Please let me know,when you would like to arrange time to meet.Thanks and Have a great day.
Please ,check what i wrote below about reply to a job offer and mark my mistakes and make the correct if you can Thanks!
the email questions I recieves!
I have received an email of interest off of an inquiry you had filled out on an ad I had posted on Career Builder. I am responding to your interest, but would like to know a little bit about you and your background before scheduling an interview.
>
> Right now I have several clients in the western metro that are in need of a new caregiver or looking to start services soon.
>
> 1) Can you please tell me about yourself?
> 2) What do you enjoy about working or spending time with elderly people?
> 3) What hours would you be available to work?
> 4) Do you have reliable transportation, a valid driver's license and automobile insurance?
>
This is my reply to the email!
Good morning to you!
I am asma fiqi, I have worked with different companies through my life.Such as , st.jude medical my job was to build medical parts,Delta global service,my job was to take care of the planes such as cleaning , straighting cushion, providing suplies etc. I helped passengers with whatever they needed, helped elder people who needed my assistent when they were flying and so forth.Through my life experience with all the jobs i had,I worked with different people from different back grounds.I also did team work and costumer service.I worked for starbucks and my job was serving people drinking , food and making sure every was happy and satisfied with the service i provided as a costumer service.I like working with elders and needy because I learned that through my culture,helping your neighbors and needy is charty and as a human one supposed to be caring and giving what he/he loves her/him self.I also helped my grandpa who was old and disable for years and i enjoyed helping him with cleaning, cooking and talking to him , listening and so forth. I think i have the potential working with elder people because i am good person , outgoing , compassionate.I think this job is great fit for me because of who I am and the experience that have helping others.Yes, I have valid driver license, a car and i would like to work part time.We can discuss about the hours. Please let me know,when you would like to arrange time to meet.Thanks and Have a great day.
