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Posts by Miss Pearl
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Miss Pearl   
Apr 3, 2011
Graduate / Advantages and disadvantages of portable entertainment devices (MP3, DVD) [6]

Portable entertainment devices, such as: Mp3 or DVD-players, which allow people to listen to music or watch films, are now commonplace. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Nowadays, products of hi-tech like a Mp3 or DVD-players become to be parts of the humans' life. In my opinion, these technologies have merits and demerits.

People use these modern techniques everywhere and any time because they are portable, compact and may contain a lot of info compared with diskets or tape recording. For example, we can take Mp3 or DVD-players with us during the travelling or going to somewhere. And these devices don't claim more place than oldest. Moreover, we are able to record not only music or movies, but also educational programmes. These type of technologies have some opportunities. For instance, it can work without electricity and it is easy to handle. Besides, they have additional devices earphones in order not to distract other people.

On the other hand, Mp3 or DVD-players have some drawbacks. I mean, they cause sometimes incidents (stray off the environmental around). As an example, while crossing the street or driving transport facilities, which even be reason for an accident.

To sum up, I agree that today Mp3 or DVD-players play a great role in human's life. And these easy movable techniques have both advantages and disadvantages. However, I think that there are more merits than demerits.
Miss Pearl   
Apr 3, 2011
Writing Feedback / The internet gives us a lot of information, someone thinks it might create problems. [4]

hi I am not a teacher but I think that you have some mistakes:
which help us to save more much time and more energy by finding them.
however, from my point of views view(not s)
And I think that you didn't write about problems. In my opinion in 1 body paragraph you should write about advantages and in 2 paragraph about problems
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