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Apr 17, 2011
Writing Feedback / I strongly believe that pets must be part from every family [5]

I have been having cat since 5 years. Her name is Jess and I love her. She is cute, lovable and friendly, she is like my little sister that I do not have. Also the old people have said "The dog is your best friend". These are only two of all reasons why in my opinion pets must be like part of your family. In the following passage I will show you some other.

First of all, pets cannot speak. This means that they can hurt you with their words like many people do in your busy daily routine. Everyone, who has a pet in home, knows that when he or she comes home after work will receive only sweet mew from his/her cat or slipper close to the door from the dog. Every day after school I know that when I go home will see her and she will stay next to my when I make my homework. She looks just like she supports my.

Second, one pet must be treated like a family member, because there are many couples that live together and in one moment they want to have children, but if they are not sure in themselves, because one baby wants care, they take a pet. The pets in this case are like an exercise before the babies. On first place you must feed them. Also you must clean after them. The dogs need to go for a walk in the park for example. This is just like my sister and her husband did. They have wanted to have kids, but she was not sure if she had enough time for them. They have been having cat since 3 years and my little nephew since 2 years. This is the perfect example how pets can help you.

The pets are just perfect. On one hand when you can spend your free time with them, to relax with them. But also to make a preparation for your future kids for example. It has many different reasons about my choice. That is way I strongly believe that pets must be part from every family.
tdamqnova   
Apr 17, 2011
Writing Feedback / Elderly people alone or with their family (TOEFL Essay) [7]

Dear Daliqin, what do you mean by an acceptable structure? Do you think my structure is bad, because I have attend TOEFL course and I think mi structure is OK. I will be glad to give me more details about the perfect structure, only on this way I will improve myself. Thanks.
tdamqnova   
Apr 16, 2011
Writing Feedback / TOEFL Essay: Raise children in City or Suburbs? [8]

I have just read your passage and I can give you many arguments opposite your thesis. You must work at your argumentation.I understand you.At the beginning at my TOEFL preparation my main problem was the same. :))
tdamqnova   
Apr 16, 2011
Writing Feedback / Elderly people alone or with their family (TOEFL Essay) [7]

Thanks a lot !! The word I think was homes.. I`m not sure why I have wrote it.Stupid mistake like every way. If some of you can give me directions to take my TOEFL I would be very thankful. I`m very nervous about it. However, every help is welcome :))
tdamqnova   
Apr 13, 2011
Writing Feedback / Elderly people alone or with their family (TOEFL Essay) [7]

In some societies elderly people live with their childhood or grandchildren, when they cannot support themselves. In other societies elderly live with in special residents call retirement hole, which are operated by health professionals. Compare the two systems. Which do you think is better?

Many people believe that they must help and protect their parents, when they become old. The most popular ways for doing this are two. First is to live together with them or to leave them to the care of health specialists in retirement hole. We must think first and then to choose which way is better in our so busy daily round?

On first place to live together with your parents means one really big place for living, when everyone to have space for himself. Also you must be more careful about every daily routine. One typical example is the noise, because the elderly people need a rest and calm. But on the other hand they can help with cooking and the other obligations for one mother, who is working. In addiction they can take care of their grandchildren.

To leave your parents with someone, who will help them is the other way to be sure that they are fine. On one hand this type of help is much expensive. Also you are not with them anyway; you just go see them one in a week for example. On the other hand it has many benefits. They are with other elderly people with who they can have similar interests and they can find a common language.

I strongly believe it is better to take me parents to live with my. I prefer to see them every day and to have the opportunity to speck with them about my daily round. Also my mother is a teacher and can help my kids with their homework.Everyone must think out, before to make a decision, but for the health of our parents, we must think over again.
tdamqnova   
Apr 13, 2011
Writing Feedback / [Anne Boleyn] - Famous person I want to meet [6]

Thanks you a lot Kevin :)) Yes, I know I copied information, but is is only because I was not shore about the history of Anne Boleyn. Nevertheless, I am very grateful to your corrections. It will be pleasure for me to post another essay here and receive your opinion and help.
tdamqnova   
Apr 7, 2011
Writing Feedback / [Anne Boleyn] - Famous person I want to meet [6]

If I can travel back to time to meet one famous person from history, I would choose Anne Boleyn without hesitation. She is one of the most famous queens in English history, though she ruled for just three years. Anne Boleyn was Henry VIII's second wife and was quite the manipulator. By most accounts she was strong-willed and beautiful woman. I would love to be able and sit and talk with her about life, her aspirations and visions for the future of England.

First of all, I am very impressed from her pride and her quality to stand up for her rights and wishes. This is the type of person I have ever wanted to be. Good example is the beginning of her relationship with Henry VIII. In 1525, Henry VIII became enamored of Anne and began pursuing her. She resisted his attempts to seduce her, refusing to become his mistress as her sister Mary had. It soon became the one absorbing object of Henry's desires to annul his marriage to Queen Catherine so he would be free to marry Anne. Her action in this case shows her

Second she was good educated and her marriage with Henry VIII made her a key figure in the political and religious upheaval that was the start of the English Reformation. This is very impressive about one young lady like her. Anne Boleyn was able to grant petitions, receive diplomats, give patronage and had enormous influence over her future husband to plead the cause of foreign diplomats. Everyone has known that it was essential to have her approval if one wanted to influence the English government. Also only thanks to Anne Boleyn the England's international position became stable. She solidified an alliance with France, which has basic to all this.

Anne Boleyn is strong, ambitious and proud woman. Keeping all these reasons in my mind, I want to meet her.

This is my 3 essay and in the end of April I must take my TOEFL.I am a little bit nervous about it.If someone can help me and improve my essay, I would be very grateful.
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