About essay- I feel its not in a flow. Your 1st paragraph is not much connect with rest and visa versa.
Do you recall reading a short story or any article. If you do, read it again and see how each paragraph is well connect with each other. Moreover, I agree with A.Smith :-). He offered a wise advice, better make a use of it. :-)
Rest is fine :D
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