adoran
Apr 11, 2011
Undergraduate / "Mr. Parcher, my seventh grade basket ball coach" - person who influenced me [5]
Hi there. My suggestions/corrections will be in red.
A person who has had a significant influence on me is my seventh grade basketball coach, Mr. Parcher. Throughout the years not only has he been my coach, but also my bible and biology teacher, and most importantly, my rock and my confidant.With his guidance, he has helped me to become not only a better Christian, but a better person.
Every time I turn around, I see him displaying an act of kindness or love . It is inspiring how he makes time for each and every one of us -- making us each feel as though we have his undivided attention no matter how big or small the problem. I find that his demeanor in life inspires me with his intensity for and loyalty to God.
Often times I like to just sit with him before or after school to just talk about the future. Any subject I approach him with, I can be sure that I will leave feeling enlightened. He has taught me study and organization skills that will help me throughout my entire life. I know I can come to him to talk about anything that is on my mind.
I am blessed to have had Mr. Parcher in my life, and I look forward to having a continued friendship with him for years to come. (Good)I will forever have appreciation and admiration for the way he strove to find the silver lining of every bad situation. I cannot imagine what my high school life experience would have been without Mr. Parcher, and for that, I am thankful.
I hope this helps! And good luck!
Hi there. My suggestions/corrections will be in red.
A person who has had a significant influence on me is my seventh grade basketball coach, Mr. Parcher. Throughout the years not only has he been my coach, but also my bible and biology teacher, and most importantly, my rock and my confidant.With his guidance, he has helped me to become not only a better Christian, but a better person.
Every time I turn around, I see him displaying an act of kindness or love . It is inspiring how he makes time for each and every one of us -- making us each feel as though we have his undivided attention no matter how big or small the problem. I find that his demeanor in life inspires me with his intensity for and loyalty to God.
Often times I like to just sit with him before or after school to just talk about the future. Any subject I approach him with, I can be sure that I will leave feeling enlightened. He has taught me study and organization skills that will help me throughout my entire life. I know I can come to him to talk about anything that is on my mind.
I am blessed to have had Mr. Parcher in my life, and I look forward to having a continued friendship with him for years to come. (Good)I will forever have appreciation and admiration for the way he strove to find the silver lining of every bad situation. I cannot imagine what my high school life experience would have been without Mr. Parcher, and for that, I am thankful.
I hope this helps! And good luck!