MinnieQ
Apr 15, 2011
Writing Feedback / Spending life time in a changing manner. IELTS Task 2 [6]
Hi Aria,
Thank you for sharing your essay.
I don't have the ability to write an essay as yours coz my writing is not good at all.
However, I hope my advice will give you a little help.
First, the typing mistake is "get ride of".
Second, aside from "boring", you also can use other words, like "humdrum".
Thank you again, Aria.
Hi Aria,
Thank you for sharing your essay.
I don't have the ability to write an essay as yours coz my writing is not good at all.
However, I hope my advice will give you a little help.
First, the typing mistake is "get ride of".
Second, aside from "boring", you also can use other words, like "humdrum".
Thank you again, Aria.
