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Ultimate csp   
May 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / Help to writing an argumentative essay on globalization (beneficial or not) [6]

Globalization is the result of human innovations and technological progress. Many pP eople view globalization in different ways. Some view it as a process that is beneficial, a process inevitable and irreversible, nevertheless others view it as a big problem for the different cultures.
One important consideration is that, many experts are worried because of the cultural globalization, because many people have been changing yourtheir lifestyles because of thisit . Another important consideration is that, the numbers of people that goes on fast foods areis increasing.
On the one hand this increasing/enhancement is good, because nowadays people don't have many time to do yourtheir own food, however on the other hand, fast foods areis not good for health, because theyit presents serious health risks to its consumers, like obesity.
A further explanation is that Globalization can be looked at viewed from different aspects, like, economically, technologically, politically, culturally and environmentally,.B ased on this information it's essential to conclude that despite the negative aspects of globalization (like the cultural globalization) sheit tends to be good in others aspects too .

It is my humble concern and i am not an expert of it...
Ultimate csp   
May 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / When flatters get together, the devil goes to dinner [5]

Thanks a lot. your concern is real help. In fact i am also new here. And also new in trying to write some thing. You remarks are really valuable and encouraging...
Ultimate csp   
May 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / Resilient nature of life is quite due to hope. [3]

Good effort!
Your second paragraph breaks the consistency of your expression as having a quite different point of view from the first paragraph.
May be you should mentions that it is about the buoy. In a manner that... To elaborate the concept of the buoy of life, we can take an ordinary example of life jackets....

It is my humble assessment and i am not an expert...
Ultimate csp   
May 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / When flatters get together, the devil goes to dinner [5]

Flattery is a social evil. It serves the same purpose as that of devil. Corruption, depravity and injustice are byproducts of flattery. Victim of it never knows about it but when it gets too late to mend. It is just like sweet poison.

An ordinary example of flattery is to flatter a teacher by his/her student, in order to get good marks. Flattered, if at the top of the tree, is being used by his/her subordinates to get illegitimate benefits of his/her position. It may includes to dis merit talent by manipulating flattered with help of flattery. Flatterer is such an ugly customer who never lets his/her target know that what's what and what he/she is all about.

Flatterer is a wolf in sheep's clothes and its victim goes hard with criticism because he/she becomes habitual of hanging on his lips good words about self. Under the thumb of flatterer he/she can not bear even constructive and positive criticism by sincere ones. Flattered nature of giving himself/herself airs results in reducing sincere people around him/her and enhancing flatterers.

In short; vanity, corruption, lie and many other social evils are result of flattery. All these factors, which cause chaos in a society, are obligations of devil. When devil gets an subordinate, flatterer, to fulfill its responsibilities, there remains no need of devil itself, So devil can enjoy a break.
Ultimate csp   
May 12, 2011
Book Reports / Use a quote as title for my literature paper? [7]

well i think that you can use the quotation for your research paper title.
I am not so rich in literature as to suggest you any thing regarding it... Lets look for some expert opinion...
Ultimate csp   
May 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / These days everyone seems to have more and more possessions. Our strong desire to own [4]

These days everyone seems to have more and more possessions. Our strong desire to own thesematerial things is making us less aware of important personal qualities such as kindness and concern for others.

Do you agree or disagree?

Currently, the world society is facing a problem, called egoism; the majority of people are intendingbetter to use aiming to own more and more things, which makes them to become self- concerned rather than being generous and grateful towardsto each other. As I greatly value inter- human relationships, I agree with the claim above.

Living in the economic era, we have established/this economic era forced us to establish many beliefs dictating that every human being must be valued and appreciated in accordance to the amount of wealth he or she has. Being the most active presenter of society, the media, chases after rich celebrities, not after ordinary people. In other words, the more money one earns, the more attention and respect he/she will receive.

Furthermore, I have an impression that in the past, family members gathered together after a working day to share with their news or experiences, so that proper communication within the family is constituted and warm feelings amongst them arewere created. These days, however, people dash out the street or fly to some exotic islands to show off their latest bought belongings or other luxury stuff. Consequently, they arethere is a lack of real communication which is the key factor that lead peopleto love each other and to maintain kind relationships .

Finally, having rushed to pursue more and more people become mind-captured by the things they own, replacing friends and relatives with them.more and more people rushed to pursue themselves to replace friends and relatives with the things they own.( i could not make any sense of your sentence.) Unfortunately, it is not the end and those seduced,start to caretakes care about their possessions. Subsequently, they have no thought about the life blooming with feelings and experiences that can not be bought.

All in all, I admit, today people today are surrounded with their items, considering them as a sign for better status, but each of them is making himself/herself isolated from thatthis society. Nevertheless, I believe, we should not replace real human qualities with stocks of things and we should try to live in sense of kindness and love.

Well it is my humble attempt to mark out mistakes and i am not an expert...
Ultimate csp   
May 11, 2011
Writing Feedback / Life succeeds in that, it seems to fail [4]

Life has resilient nature, it never let hope to cut off even in the lurch. It arrives at specific conditioning through entertaining demands at variable intervals and in variable amounts and some times at discretion. This comes up with optimism. Optimism let one to crow over even in inauspicious conditions. In fact life do miracles in lurch conditions and turns the corner.

It triumphs, when there is no hope of its victory.

Traditional stories, which are being recounted by a man to a child, have the ultimate positive end. They implants in the flesh and blood that every bad and the worst have a well chosen end. And in actual the same comes about. A death bed patient, for an ordinary example, bears a charmed life. A stuck labor in a mine is rescued after a couple of days. These off and thens are the very reason that the hope dies but with the last breath.

If we dive deep in the history of world, we come up that every time when there was no way out but stars were in the ascendant. Subcontinent's fate in 17th century was hanging in balance. All India National Congress decided it in complete darkness. Germany, when it was quite at sea, found the hope in the shape of Hitler. USA was quite at its wit's end and was about to gave up all in vain after ten years war but it made a pile and turned the table by killing Osama.

On contrary there are many cases where felicity is left awaited and never comes. A pathetic poor man facing adverse economic situations, for instance, annihilates itself because he/she remains unable to discover light in future.

Over all, life is beautiful having optimistic nature and whenever it is being challenged it nails its color to the mast.
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