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Posts by faisal
Joined: May 8, 2011
Last Post: May 12, 2011
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faisal   
May 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / Internet... a blessing or a bane? [5]

Internet is a modern way of getting in touch with rest of the world.

Internet converted the world exactly into a glibal village. Now, one living in Japan is quite at written, verbal and even visual communication with the other one living in Denmark. Another hallmark of internet is that it gives free access to a number of educational journals, books, general informations and current affairs. Countless development in the field of trade and business is also one of the miracles of internet. More over it minimizes the chances of cultural clash by providing knowledge of each culture.

Along with this all, we can not ignore the way, internet is exploiting the youth. It is refraining youth from being in touch with libraries and diminishing the book reading habit among students and scholars. It thus makes therm through and through dependent upon technology. Further more a number of useless sites providing chit chat and low quality videos, which not only wastes youth's precious time but also demolishes moralities. Freedom of expression allows any one to write any thing about any one in any way. It causes chaos when one speaks bad against other's good.

To all intents and purposes, a gun itself never shots an innocent but it is the hunter who shots. A knife can cut both the vegetable and the neck. Same goes for internet. So it is up to use whether to make internet a blessing or a bane.
faisal   
May 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / Help to writing an argumentative essay on globalization (beneficial or not) [6]

nice effort
You need to start with how globaliztions comes about and what actually it means. like through internet, fast modes of communication and open trade among all countries of world.

It may result in destroying specificities of different cultures, merging them and ultimate end will be one culture, one language, one style and even one thinking pattern over all the world...

Regards!
my opnion is not an expert opnion...
faisal   
May 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / When flatters get together, the devil goes to dinner [5]

I think that you have given a less amount of evils which flattery causes. You need to quote one or two more example in order to make your point of view clear...

Regards!
my opnion is not an expert opnion
faisal   
May 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / Resilient nature of life is quite due to hope. [3]

Hope is the buoy of life



Resilient nature of life is quite due to hope. Hope finds out bright lines even in utmost darkness. If one has nothing but hope, it can get every thing and if one has every thing but hope, it can loss every thing. Hope lets one to think miracles even in impossible situations. If one cuts off hope, it ultimately cuts off life.

Hope is just like life jackets which are used when there is some accident in waters. Life jackets save lives but for a short period of time, and after that if victims are not being rescued, they die. Same is true for hope, if it does not get any positive regard it also dies.

Hope is a permanent source of happiness even in miserable conditions. An ill old woman, whose son is at border in a war, lives with a hope that one day her son will be back with medals. A patient, suffering from an incurable disease, lives with an unrealistic hope of long life.Thus in adverse conditions only hope can make one to smile.

Hope saves life when it is about to end but it alone can not help saving life for a long time.
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