arveen gan
Jun 8, 2011
arveen gan
May 20, 2011
Essays / Research Question - Death Penalty; Need a direction [10]
tq very much for your immediate promptness.could you pls give me the links. Really appreciated.
Regards,
arveen gan
tq very much for your immediate promptness.could you pls give me the links. Really appreciated.
Regards,
arveen gan
arveen gan
May 20, 2011
Undergraduate / "not to roam around with people from other countries" - an intercultural event/issue [10]
overall your essay is great .
Try to work more on your sentence structure and in other words your essay is awesome:)
overall your essay is great .
Try to work more on your sentence structure and in other words your essay is awesome:)
arveen gan
May 20, 2011
Essays / Research Question - Death Penalty; Need a direction [10]
Should the death penalty be abolished or not? How to elaborate?
hi,
i am writing this essay i have a little points to elaborate this essay.Im glad if you could help me on this essay.
Im anticipating a valuable feedback.
Tq and have an awesome day.
Regards
Arveen
Should the death penalty be abolished or not? How to elaborate?
hi,
i am writing this essay i have a little points to elaborate this essay.Im glad if you could help me on this essay.
Im anticipating a valuable feedback.
Tq and have an awesome day.
Regards
Arveen
arveen gan
May 17, 2011
Writing Feedback / 'equality, responsibility and oneness' - dress code should be implemented [4]
Dear Heena !
It is a great job. Your essay is interesting.
Dress code is designed to maintain uniformality in dress. The skul or colleges passes sound legislation for all the student(s)to wear one colour pant and one colour shirt so that they will be easily distingushed from other students .At times outsides non-collegiates students enter the college and creat disturbance . Beacause of uniform they will be easily distiguised from the other student.- DO NOT START THE SENTENCE BECAUSE..YOU MAY SAY THIS IS BECAUSE ...
Unformity in the dress will retard inferiority complex from the minds of poor children. they will feel equal with the rich students in the skul. The narrow mindedness in them will get vanished. Instead they feel oneness. In consequence the bond among them will increase, love and understanding, sharing of joy and sorrow ,standing up for each other attitude grows.This instead crops up good will,great will and united spirit.
Dress code is a credit of a student. As khaki is the dress code and symbol of policy, spotted grey dress is the credit of millitary, white garments benifits politicians .In the similar manner a uniform dress code fits to a student. As a police man wears his/her uniform . he/she gets aware of his/her duties and responsibilites so as we students.
Dress code is quite indispensable in an educational institution.It qualifies a student status , makes him equal,bring a sense pf responsibility and oneness. It highlight the status of the educational institutionIt qualifies a student status , makes him equal,bring a sense pf responsibility and oneness. It highlight the status of the educational institution. It brings end to disparity & division.
All heads of the institution should implement it for the interest of the student.
Dear Heena !
It is a great job. Your essay is interesting.
Dress code is designed to maintain uniformality in dress. The skul or colleges passes sound legislation for all the student(s)to wear one colour pant and one colour shirt so that they will be easily distingushed from other students .At times outsides non-collegiates students enter the college and creat disturbance . Beacause of uniform they will be easily distiguised from the other student.- DO NOT START THE SENTENCE BECAUSE..YOU MAY SAY THIS IS BECAUSE ...
Unformity in the dress will retard inferiority complex from the minds of poor children. they will feel equal with the rich students in the skul. The narrow mindedness in them will get vanished. Instead they feel oneness. In consequence the bond among them will increase, love and understanding, sharing of joy and sorrow ,standing up for each other attitude grows.This instead crops up good will,great will and united spirit.
Dress code is a credit of a student. As khaki is the dress code and symbol of policy, spotted grey dress is the credit of millitary, white garments benifits politicians .In the similar manner a uniform dress code fits to a student. As a police man wears his/her uniform . he/she gets aware of his/her duties and responsibilites so as we students.
Dress code is quite indispensable in an educational institution.It qualifies a student status , makes him equal,bring a sense pf responsibility and oneness. It highlight the status of the educational institutionIt qualifies a student status , makes him equal,bring a sense pf responsibility and oneness. It highlight the status of the educational institution. It brings end to disparity & division.
All heads of the institution should implement it for the interest of the student.