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'equality, responsibility and oneness' - dress code should be implemented


heena33 4 / 18  
May 17, 2011   #1
Dress code is designed to maintain uniformality in dress. The skul or colleges passes sound legislation for all the student to wear one colour pant and one colour shirt so that they will be easily distingushed from other students .At times outsides non-collegiates students enter the college and creat disturbance . Beacause of uniform they will be easily distiguised from the other student.

Unformity in the dress will retard inferiority complex from the minds of poor children. they will feel equal with the rich students in the skul. The narrow mindedness in them will get vanished. Instead they feel oneness. In consequence the bond among them will increase, love and understanding, sharing of joy and sorrow ,standing up for each other attitude grows.This instead crops up good will,great will and united spirit.

Dress code is a credit of a student. As khaki is the dress code and symbol of policy, spotted grey dress is the credit of millitary, white garments benifits politicians .In the similar manner a uniform dress code fits to a student. As a police man wears his/her uniform . he/she gets aware of his/her duties and responsibilites so as we students.

Dress code is quite indispensable in an educational institution.It qualifies a student status , makes him equal,bring a sense pf responsibility and oneness. It highlight the status of the educational institution. It brings end to disparity & division.

All heads of the institution should implement it for the interest of the student.

thank you

arveen gan - / 5  
May 17, 2011   #2
Dear Heena !

It is a great job. Your essay is interesting.

Dress code is designed to maintain uniformality in dress. The skul or colleges passes sound legislation for all the student(s)to wear one colour pant and one colour shirt so that they will be easily distingushed from other students .At times outsides non-collegiates students enter the college and creat disturbance . Beacause of uniform they will be easily distiguised from the other student.- DO NOT START THE SENTENCE BECAUSE..YOU MAY SAY THIS IS BECAUSE ...

Unformity in the dress will retard inferiority complex from the minds of poor children. they will feel equal with the rich students in the skul. The narrow mindedness in them will get vanished. Instead they feel oneness. In consequence the bond among them will increase, love and understanding, sharing of joy and sorrow ,standing up for each other attitude grows.This instead crops up good will,great will and united spirit.

Dress code is a credit of a student. As khaki is the dress code and symbol of policy, spotted grey dress is the credit of millitary, white garments benifits politicians .In the similar manner a uniform dress code fits to a student. As a police man wears his/her uniform . he/she gets aware of his/her duties and responsibilites so as we students.

Dress code is quite indispensable in an educational institution.It qualifies a student status , makes him equal,bring a sense pf responsibility and oneness. It highlight the status of the educational institutionIt qualifies a student status , makes him equal,bring a sense pf responsibility and oneness. It highlight the status of the educational institution. It brings end to disparity & division.

All heads of the institution should implement it for the interest of the student.
OP heena33 4 / 18  
May 18, 2011   #3
thanks for ur suggestion i will keep it in my mind.
and thanks for appreciation
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,335 129  
May 18, 2011   #4
Thanks Arveen! I'll give some more corrections:

A dress code is designed to maintain uniformity in dress.

The school or college passes sound legislation for all the student to wear one colour pants and one colour shirt so that they will be easily distinguished from other students.---This does not make it easy to distinguish them. It makes it more difficult to distinguish them! :-)

I like this part: The narrow-mindedness in them will soon vanish. Instead they will feel oneness.----I made small changes, but I really like your idea.

The dress code is quite indispensable in an educational institution.
Use a spell checker program! You have some spelling errors... :-)


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